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Bruej

06-05-2007, 03:28 AM

Hello,
I made the following sketch in Photoshop CS2, I'm having difficutly in that the picture feels like it lacks depth. To me the 2 characters look more like paper-cut-outs on a stage. Is it too early to tell (does anyone else have this problem), or does anyone else see it?

I would love some genuine feedback as well. The idea of this piece is to "stop and smell the roses". There's the battle weary woman warrior and the male royal figure w/ the ferret. One is all work and no play, the other is all play and no work.

Thanks,
Matt

http://i56.photobucket.com/albums/g198/mhoare1/Roses.jpg

tanicdesigns

06-06-2007, 10:59 PM

i feel the detail on the right is lacking. good work over all/

Bruej

06-07-2007, 09:41 PM

Hi Tanic,

thanks for the compliment, do you mean the entire right side? or just the figure on the right?

Thanks again,
bruej

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