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cgmodeler
06-03-2007, 07:10 PM
Hello everyone it's been a while, i had to finish this short film from scratch within 3 months, here's the result, i know it has many mistakes but i promise the next one will be much more detailed.

I did also the music so you might figure out a lot of things came into the production.

Please throw as many comments and critiques as you like, i'm preparing to get notes on every detail that i can change on this short.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uDoIOE0s_Js

Thanks a lot :)
penthoy
06-05-2007, 03:51 AM
good camera shake, i like it, when it starts, the building was modeled and lighted quite good, something kinda bother me tho, when I see something stops completely like when first time he sees she was on her tears, the camera should be cuted before the character completely stops motion, cause nothing in animation should stopped completely, and there were a few other cuts that does that. also at the end, the packeges got thowned into the ground seems a bit odd, because of the squash and stretch should retained it's value. other then that, it's very impressive.
cgmodeler
06-05-2007, 04:09 AM
I wasn't able to see those details until you pointed them. Thanks a lot, I'm refining that ASAP.
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