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darklopium83
05-27-2007, 12:08 PM
hi everyone,

here is the first short film we made in 3months for our 2nde year in the french superior school of visual effects Aries.
We were 2 students working on this project...
Now hunting for jobs.

here's the streaming link:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cCKnNGIZq8E

here a higher resolution in h264 format:
http://holyrise.free.fr/plucked_fox.mov

hope u like it
C&C are welcome
darklopium83
06-21-2007, 01:31 PM
nobody for critik our short?
Bennie25
06-21-2007, 03:38 PM
Hi lopium_l

Nice shortfilm, but there are some troubles with the animations (for example when the fox walks) but as I said very nice short! I like the style and modelling. Keep it up!

Ben
chikos
06-21-2007, 03:38 PM
Well, the animation is too slow and needs more refining. There is some camera clipping where the wolf is running towards the camera. The chicken have the same clipping too. On the other hand, the backgrounds were ok.:)
darklopium83
06-21-2007, 04:04 PM
thanks for your crits.
i know that the animation is not really good but we have done this in only 3months, story board scenario design etc and it was our first short for my frined and me...
we have animate only one month for all the plans, and we knew for the clipping of the cam. but we did not have the time to re-render the scene, we have finish our short only one day before have our jury!
Coloniser
06-21-2007, 07:12 PM
I agree with Chikos about the animation, but not bad for three months work!....although how many of you were working on it??
darklopium83
06-21-2007, 08:40 PM
I agree with Chikos about the animation, but not bad for three months work!....although how many of you were working on it??

thks for your crits!
we were only 2 on work on it and only 2, nobody help us exept our profesor of course...
ps : the chicken's sound were made by us in a micro!
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