the freak - autumns last leaf, Lincoln Renall (2D)

[digitalinkmind]

Fantastic painting...it´s great to know that you used oil on canvas and the background look´s preatty equalized. Just add more grass leafs to hide some parts from the roots and more contrast to the scene. Keep the good work.:thumbsup:

[hasanaliakhtar]

Hmm nice execution..Good colors..And great strokes..Keep up the good work..Cheers:)

[CNell]

love the concept! and the character is worked well altho her breast look a little odd, mayby too large and perky? not sure. the sky and whole enviromnent looks very nice. i like this painting.

[ArmyOfMayhem]

I like this very much, ncie environment. my only crit is that theres beautiful texture in the roots and the branches are almost smooth. good job.

[renall]

thanks for the feedback all :-)
pretty much confirmed all the things i was thinking were slightly lacking.....
the branches need to be a bit more textural like the roots, and some foreground grass overlap/integration with the roots.
Cnell:....funny you should say that about the breasts looking too perky....my girlfriend was just saying the same thing too :-).....trying to decide if they need to be rotated slightly around the torso towards her left arm by a few degrees.....
hope to post a finished version in about a week.....
The one thing im most happy with is that the clouds/sky and land all seem to draw the eye towards the leaf in mid air......
anyway.....cheers for the crits all, most helpful

[generationext1]

wow that realy nice n gr8 work

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