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Mangled Poly
03-15-2003, 07:35 PM
Hey all well its time to make a fool of myself and enter my first ever animation challenge fun! I have a slight idea in the back of my head what i want to do and it has to do with a fat man trying to fly.. with a catch :) anyways off to do some thinking....

I will be using Wings3d for the modeling and Lightwave for the animation!

Good luck to everyone!:bounce:

Mangled Poly
03-15-2003, 07:57 PM
Ok as i said it has to do with a fat man i did a little modeling of the mesh this morning heres what i have......

http://images.mangledpoly.com/3d/hero-challenge/body01.jpg

Not trying to do to many detials just enough for you to know that hes a big man.. also im going with more of a cartoony style....

Mangled Poly
03-15-2003, 10:31 PM
k just about finished up the body time for the limbs, i have a story board however cant seem to find the drivers for my scanner.. paperport is worthless... crits welcome....

http://images.mangledpoly.com/3d/hero-challenge/body03.jpg

Mangled Poly
03-16-2003, 12:21 AM
K done with the body time to give him his cape crits wellcome!

http://images.mangledpoly.com/3d/hero-challenge/body07.jpg

Mangled Poly
03-16-2003, 12:21 AM
and the wireframe shot....
http://images.mangledpoly.com/3d/hero-challenge/body06.jpg

wasamonkey
03-16-2003, 12:36 AM
hey great to see you giving it your all
the form and volume seam to be coming along nicely
tho I do feel your edgeloops could use some work

try and follow the bone muscle shapes then move on to fat and character details

best of luck to you
cheers

alaklij
03-16-2003, 04:24 AM
the hands are disproportionate. The hands also have greater detail than the body. Try to build in the topography of the muscular system, details of the feet. I know your gonna say the guy is supposed to be fat, yet obese persons have a muscular system as well.

For some reason I see this character with bare feet.
What kind of clothes is the guy going to wear? (besides the cape)
Or is he going to be naked?

Oh yeah, I think the belly can be bigger.

Good luck.

Mangled Poly
03-16-2003, 04:28 AM
Damn matt you had to post now i just pre bent him all nice......
:wip: :wip: :wip:
http://images.mangledpoly.com/3d/hero-challenge/body08.jpg

A MacVey
03-16-2003, 04:33 AM
looks good so far! just add some pants on him please! cant wait to see it animated.

Mangled Poly
03-16-2003, 04:40 AM
looks good so far! just add some pants on him please! cant wait to see it animated.

I dont know i was thinking a nake guy with a small cape trying to fly is truly funny :)

ZeroNeuro
03-16-2003, 04:54 AM
That is one heck of a plumber's butt you have going there. ;)
The model is clean. Really stylized, very funnt. Hehhe. The face might need some work, but I like the overall style going here.

Cheers

Mangled Poly
03-16-2003, 04:58 AM
Thanks mate :):bounce:

Mangled Poly
03-16-2003, 06:10 AM
k added a mask (every super hero needs one) and also some color cause grey is boring!
:bounce:

crits welcome
http://images.mangledpoly.com/3d/hero-challenge/body09.jpg

Mangled Poly
03-16-2003, 06:43 AM
Ok last update for today is my story board.. sorry for the bad drawing but hey its something!

http://images.mangledpoly.com/3d/hero-challenge/storyboard.jpg

Cikala
03-16-2003, 07:31 AM
Looks good so far :)

Mangled Poly
03-16-2003, 08:02 AM
thanks cikala

Jhonus
03-16-2003, 09:39 AM
good work there mangled... keep it up. :beer:

JonasNoell
03-16-2003, 09:47 AM
He's really looking sexy :D
There is something about his legs or so confusing me, seems as it needs some overwork there ;)

cANt

BiGiNnEr
03-16-2003, 02:51 PM
Thats Coming out real GOod.. Good Job That Will Be a Funny Animation:thumbsup: :applause: :D

Mangled Poly
03-16-2003, 05:14 PM
Thanks guys for all you comments!:bounce:

Daolohua CnC
03-17-2003, 08:05 AM
theres a strange space inbetween his thighs that you don't see in fat people.
...super-models, but not fat guys

other than that its good...

Mangled Poly
03-17-2003, 08:09 AM
yeah i put a gap there so it would animate just a little nicer when hes running and the esh doesnt cross eachother if that makes sence.....

Mangled Poly
03-17-2003, 10:50 PM
Soory guys my server is down time to send some hate mail

Mangled Poly
03-18-2003, 03:08 AM
LOL i think there talking out of there ass again :(


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Mangled Poly
03-19-2003, 04:05 PM
Ok the server is halfway back up so time for more progress shots! I have my guy fully rigged and ready to go!

http://images.mangledpoly.com/3d/hero-challenge/bodyrig.jpg

Mangled Poly
03-19-2003, 04:07 PM
A little candy... Im also using this guy for my homework in class and my teacher is making us put him in poses so heres the first of 6!
http://images.mangledpoly.com/3d/hero-challenge/sadpose-cg.jpg

KingMob
03-19-2003, 04:31 PM
hey man, good start. looks like your really jamming on this one.

Love the sad looking pose hehe

lets see soem motion soon :beer:

ThirdEye
03-19-2003, 05:08 PM
Great start and good concept too! :thumbsup:

RockinAkin
03-19-2003, 05:19 PM
Looks like a good start.

I really think he needs a spiked cod-piece. :eek:
Then he'll look just like the guy from that Radiohead music video.

Keep it up,
-DivideByZero-

dark_lotus
03-19-2003, 05:45 PM
Hey thats looking fantastic Mangled! You've made TONNES of progress, Keep me posted, this is excellent!

:applause: :applause: :applause:

DaveW
03-19-2003, 07:04 PM
GAAAHH!!! put some clothes on that guy :)

naked fat people with capes...

Mangled Poly
03-19-2003, 10:13 PM
Thanks guys for your comments and no Dave hes a naked fat man in a lil cape :) As far as motion goes i really want to get started on it but i have to finish these poses for school first!:bounce:

leigh
03-19-2003, 11:13 PM
I think you should make him a lot fatter :D

Just a comment on the pose - hi hand showed be palm-outwards - that current position would be rather uncomfortable ;)

Mangled Poly
03-19-2003, 11:20 PM
HEHE ok thanks ill play witht hat hand also i would make him fatter but as is its hard to animate him cause his arms always like going into his belly.... :):bounce: :bounce:

Mangled Poly
03-20-2003, 04:10 AM
Ok been working on the poses for school havent had time to do any movement yet for the challenge incase you care heres some of them....

Sad Pose - Sitting (http://images.mangledpoly.com/3d/hero-challenge/sadpose.jpg)
Proud Pose - Sitting (http://images.mangledpoly.com/3d/hero-challenge/proudpose.jpg)
Ponder Pose - Standing (http://images.mangledpoly.com/3d/hero-challenge/ponderpose1.jpg)
Strain Pose - Standing (http://images.mangledpoly.com/3d/hero-challenge/strainpose.jpg)

Peace :)

struggler
03-20-2003, 04:29 AM
i think fat people get a bad rap for the most part...i mean if skinny people can fly so can fat people. I can do anything you can do better!!!

Models looking good. Definately make him fatter. Flaunt his fattness. I like the binding...Any softbody fattness goin to be jigglin around? keep up the good work

-struggler

Mangled Poly
03-25-2003, 08:11 AM
Sorry guys have been busy with my personal and school life i finally finished the 2 last poses so now i can start animating...!

Here are the poses incase you care....

HANGING IN TERROR (http://images.mangledpoly.com/3d/hero-challenge/hang-pose.jpg)

our choice (nothing cool) (http://images.mangledpoly.com/3d/hero-challenge/free-pose.jpg)

O.Martin
03-27-2003, 09:52 AM
Can't wait for a test animation...

Mangled Poly
03-28-2003, 11:53 PM
Ok a time has come i have my WALK TEST.... now my first test i had the belly/boobs jiggle just a little but some one said i should way over exahterate it.... so tell me what you think...

Walktest01 (www.mangledpoly.com/walktest01.mov)

You need the soerence 3 codec (new from quiktime)

Also this is a low AA test render...:thumbsup:

killahsin
03-29-2003, 12:06 AM
looking good, few creases yah need to add edgeloops in the areas aroudn the thigh and under the armpits and that will fix your animation issues, as well as allowing yah to get rid of the crease around your armpit and allow yah to make them thighs thick

ZeroNeuro
03-29-2003, 02:02 AM
Haha, that's comical :) Great animation, little jiggle in his step. But he does walk too well for a man that big :D

Cheers

oxyg3n
03-29-2003, 04:04 AM
Hello Ryan,

I was looking at your model and here are a few things I noticed about it. First, In relation to your body your arms are too short and can be better proportioned. REmeber your arms are generally as long as you are tall. Second, I think that your hands are to short. And third, your guys butt should be flabbier and sag some more.

That is my two cents. I hope this helps.

Magnusv
03-29-2003, 11:46 PM
Overall pretty well done.But the one crit I can pick on you with is that the right knee locks every time he makes a step forward. But still it's a WIP,so you are close,keep at it,nice so far.:thumbsup:

ilasolomon
03-31-2003, 07:24 AM
:) haha, finally you put out an anim test! gr8 ... let's d/l & watch it.

Mangled Poly
03-31-2003, 05:55 PM
Originally posted by ila_solomon
:) haha, finally you put out an anim test! gr8 ... let's d/l & watch it.

Its near the bottom of the second page :)

Mangled Poly
03-31-2003, 06:11 PM
Ok updated the walk run cycle a little more... this will be his fast walk to trying and gain speed to take off... basically added more belly flop and some shading....

WALK TEST 02 (http://www.mangledpoly.com/walktest02.mov)

neeed sorenson3 codec

JonasNoell
03-31-2003, 06:18 PM
Very cool animation!!!
I love the fat wipping up and down like this

:bounce: :bounce: :bounce:

;)
cANt

Stephen Vyas
04-01-2003, 09:58 AM
How about some socks at least :D

Mangled Poly
04-01-2003, 04:28 PM
Originally posted by Stephen Vyas
How about some socks at least :D

I guess i can manage this much!

IDownupI
05-07-2003, 06:19 PM
damn he is fat... :bounce:

Soterialive
05-16-2003, 06:45 PM
What a funny, cute idea. One thing however, watch your walk cycle, if you are using Maya check your trax editor and notice the point on the graph where your walk cycle begins and where you have copied and pasted the second stride. His arms do not begin and end in the same spot, thereby causing this strange "jerk" in his arms. Match those times up better for a more smooth anim.

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