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yomope
03-15-2003, 07:01 PM
Hi all, so here is my first thread ( :beer: ) it was for the challenge of this month but somebody post the same idea before me so i thinks i just do it for me...c&c please
yomope
03-15-2003, 08:07 PM
... upload...
yomope
03-15-2003, 10:22 PM
:cry: no reply.... one more pic.
Syrogen
03-15-2003, 10:27 PM
haha, pretty cool idea :P i like it. keep it up :thumbsup:
Frank Dodd
03-15-2003, 11:30 PM
it looks very funny, nice concept. The biceps definitely need work they are too flatened at the top and look angular as does the tendons on the side of his neck they are almost very long and angular.

Looking good though.
yomope
03-15-2003, 11:46 PM
thx for your comment. i continue tomorow...but i still have a question:for the challenge is it a probem that somebody else post this kind of degenerated rabbit???
yomope
03-16-2003, 12:55 PM
... upload ...
yomope
03-16-2003, 01:32 PM
so i gonna fix the hand,and the feet.

please give me coments...
yomope
03-17-2003, 10:33 AM
nobody reply...is my work so bad???
mimo8
03-17-2003, 12:11 PM
your work is not bad
deffentily not

just some suggestions:
?the muscles are a little bit hard
I would soften the edges f.e. of his upper leg

?the long feet are not necessary
I think the combination of man and rabbit
are enough, donīt also mix a duck in

?also the face looks agressive
he could look a little bit funnier, perhaps
you take the symetry out out of his face
make him strange lookin
and the hawknose is also a "agressor"
(all of this is my very own opinion:)

? a cape and a logo on his chest
invent an identity for rabbit man and a logo

... the hard expression of his face will perhaps change once the mouth is shut in the animation
(I hope you do animate him - I can figure out great stories for rabbitman)
Stimpy
03-17-2003, 12:16 PM
hmmmm

that looks very similar to something iīve seen somewhere before.. i will go look for the link. it was some bunny guys in spandex suits.
Teyon
03-17-2003, 12:47 PM
I'm surprised no one mentioned the fact that he's missing shoulders. That's my only real problem with it, as I'm not the best poly modeler in the world, I don't know if you can fix that though. Nice work and interesting idea.
yomope
03-18-2003, 12:09 AM
thx all...
so :
mimo8 if the face look hard it s because he is a supervilain... the logo is in progressand i fix the feet i think it s better now
stympy:there is a superhero looking like this one but its a stupid one i think about him during modelling
now i will fixe the shoulder...
Killerj
03-18-2003, 06:55 AM
Could you give us a wireframe.. I think I know whatīs your main problem, but canīt say without wireframe :shrug:
ALZHEM
03-18-2003, 09:49 AM
SINISTER
yomope
03-19-2003, 07:17 AM
no time to work on the shoulder... but here is the wireframe...I hope you will see my problem(s?)
littlebrother
03-19-2003, 07:02 PM
HEY! HOLD ON A MINUTE!

I have patiently been waiting for the cute, fluffy, and yes, pink bunny tail. Don't shortchange me man!

Also, are you thinking more carrot or egg type of bunny?

Looks good; keep truckin!
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