Exterior render, Manh Hung Nguyen (3D)

[Neox3d]

hey man, nice lighting, but you need to work on your renders, first your texture should be in a high res and rather than having the block tecture, make the panels in 3d, or else use high res tectures, i think u used bump, it seems a liitle odd, because of the rest of the scene, also, your water is very odd with respect to render make it less riplled, also , try to use HDRI's and also your model seems too sharp , real world object dont have that kind of sharpness, try to chamfer edges a little, and use antlaliasing at a higer rate because your render objects have jagged lines, that should be missing dude,

also your eveing scene render has a problem in the reflection in the right side glass, first the reflection exposure dont math the environment, try to lower it down a little. yoiu have a nice plane with grass like that, sky is also good, just tweak with these little details, i think u will do just fine.
you did a good job, just make it better

[haihoa]

nice render :applause:, but I think reflect on glass looks strange ...:rolleyes:

[shemosus]

well done with lighting ,i think you achieved up to 90% from your goal in the daylight scenes.

[carnageRPM]

i must admit even with the few flaws its pretty good

[xxbinxx]

@ Neo: thanks I'll keep it up for the night sence I try to put a different color in the right room :D
@ haihoa: va^n~ co^' bang` anh Hoa` la` mung` roi
@ shemosus & carnageRPM: thanks all my friend :)

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