character:female_wip

[lordmachuca]

its pretty tough modeling a chick. you have some anatomical issues here.

her shoulders are way too wide for her waist. usually on a girl its the other way around narrow shoulders and big hips

her arms are too short and her feet are way too small.

her head also looks too round. The best thing you can do is check out some anatomy books thats the best tool that a modeler can have, its a must have in your collection.

her torso is also to thick towards the top females arent generally like that .

well, hope i could help.

[digtlpete]

Thanks alot for the crits, they are very helpfull. that was exactly what I needed.

[digtlpete]

here are some updates. Any feed back is greatly appreciated.

thanks,

www.digitalpete.net/wip/womanfront.jpg
www.digitalpete.net/wip/womanper.jpg

[Stimpy]

looking a lot better now but still theres lots to fix.

are you using references for the proportions, because they still seem to be a bit off...

her collarbone area looks good, but her boobs seem kind of tacked on, because there is a rather sharp edge coming from the armpits.

her face looks good but somehow seems too small in the head, if you know what i mean...
her neck seems a bit too long

and considering how small her stomach is i would reconsider the size of those hips.

so, as lordmachuca pointed out, check some anatomical references, best at www.fineart.sk . get some nice drawing and check your proportions.

though i did mention a couple of points i think all of them are rather easy to fix, so good luck :)

[digtlpete]

Stimpy your the man. Thanks for the comments, i did not realize there was a site that had these great figure references. Thanks for the info.

thanks

[digtlpete]

here are some updates, any comments are welcome.
www.digitalpete.net/wip/womanfront2.jpg
www.digitalpete.net/wip/womanper2.jpg

[Stimpy]

looking a lot better now. normally you would model her with her legs together, that makes it a bit easier to judge proportions. it looks like her upper leg is far longer than her lower one (if those are the right names.. :D )
maybe check into that. otherwise looking a lot better already.

[digtlpete]

It is a lot easier to judge proportions with the legs together. I modeled her with her legs apart because I think it is easier to rig her up when the character is in this position. I will look at making her upper leg a little shorter. I really apreciate all of the comments. I think that this model has become a ton better since I began posting here.

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