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mgarthee
05-16-2007, 07:14 PM
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Title: the chase
Name: Matt Garthee
Country: USA
Software: CINEMA 4D, Photoshop

This piece is titled "The Chase". I used Cinema4D and Photoshop. In particular, I'd like critiques on the A-wing and Tie Fighter. The background is an image. Comments are most welcome. Thanks
Xeroedge
05-17-2007, 10:20 AM
Pretty dope models, and nice background. This scene needs work though.

The first thing I notice is that you really need some motion blur.
The other is just make them look a bit rusted, or more metallic, basically just texture work.
You need to bring those fights to life with damage, and maybe a few little pieces with weathering
berniebernie
05-17-2007, 04:26 PM
you got your lights a little messed up - on the earth stock photo the sun is coming from behind the planet however your tie fighter shadows make it look like the sun's coming from some other place


your camera could use a little more work to emphasize 'the chase', make it a little more dramatic

your models seem pretty good =)
Teriander
05-17-2007, 05:09 PM
I completely agree with mlkdesign (http://forums.cgsociety.org/member.php?u=51364) The first thing I noticed is the sun's location behind the Tie Fighter, but yet the Tie Fighter has a STRONG light from another direction..
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