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Hmura
03-15-2003, 12:49 AM
Hi guys heres my latest WIP, Franc , a cartoony interpretation of frankenstein. I am working loosely of my own sketch. The modeling is done in Wings 3D. Im currently modeling the rest of him, ill post updates soon.... :)

C&C Welcome...

Hmura
03-16-2003, 08:16 AM
...okay... well anyhoo heres some different views of Franc... thanks for the comments :surprised

www.hmura.7p.com/FrancView.jpg

copy and paste link to see, sorry about that, the web provider is crap...

Backstabbeth
03-16-2003, 08:20 AM
hey... he's very cute.. i liike... i would move the "bolts" down more tiwards the lower head/ neck area like they are on the OG franky


well donr.. i like his silly smirk

Hmura
03-19-2003, 02:48 PM
heres an update, still working on the shirt but what do you think so far?

http://hmura.7p.com/FrancWithShirt.jpg

Witchy
03-19-2003, 03:33 PM
He's got character, look forward to seeing more of him.

zzzrByte
03-19-2003, 10:54 PM
Very good start! It's got lots of character and tons of potential.

A couple of comments:
1. The seams need more work, it very obvious that you didn't put too much effort into them. I attached some pics of Abe from Oddworld, check out his stitches (to be honest, those aren't the best shots of his stitches)... Also, try to get your hands on Tim Burton's The Nightmare Before Christmas... There's a franken-girl there, with stitches all over her bod.

2. The Screws in his head don't look right... Try to model them after some kind of real mechanical parts... And use sharper edges on them.

I am looking forward to seeing how this one is going to turn out.

ckpew99
03-19-2003, 11:43 PM
Cool looking character, lets see some more like neck down.:applause:

zzzrByte
03-20-2003, 01:02 PM
Oops, forgot to attach the pic of Abe's stitches to the last post.

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