girl and bear illo

[pickthall]

I think this is really cute - the only thing id be tempted to do is try and compress it more into a widescreen type aspect as there is a lot of wasted space. You could enlarge the girl and the bear. Nice work regardless.


Jayce

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[Guiguitte]

It's quite cute and not too bad, but I'd particularly review the composition.

[nethken]

pickthall: Thanks for the comments! Yeh I think summit was up with the composition, but ive changed that, and Ive posted now, is it better now? thanks for advice!

Guiguitte: thanks the input!! I have reviewed the composition - it was definetely off!

http://www.nethken.co.uk/kablog/15.05.07_a.jpg

[Sullaford]

Actually feels a bit more dynamic now. And yes, there is not so much empty space. I liked it before and I really like it now.

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