character: swordman

[lildragon]

Looks pretty descent, but there's something really odd with the perspective, it's like its almost "skewed" in a way... Also the lack of any buttocks definition makes it look like his crouch area :)

The left scapula has a really odd deformation also, and the right one pretrudes too far in, and it's quite large in comparison.

And finally I'm not too positive I like the pose, the line of action isn't as solid as it should be imo. See attached, in the quick silhouette I've done it's an entirely different pose... hope this helps

salud

[Knox]

Thanks a lot, lildragon
these comments are very usefull for me

I've seen this picture so many times that I can't have no more perspective with it

what you said is true and I'm motivated to do better;)

[Obear71]

The drawing as a whole is VERY nice indeed, your eye for colour, shade and muscle tone is very good.

But as stated above the perspective seem a little off.

He needs a butt, thats for sure :)

His spine seems to be kinked, instead of a nice arch

Neck is a little on the long side for the size of head, and the head needs to be a little bigger i think.

But overall a job well done :)

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