Character: Young girl (1/2 cartoon 1/2 real) for my short film

[LordShaitan]

Personally i dont like the anatomy, im not sure if your trying to make it a woman, or a little girl. There are characteristiscs of both thus giving me mixed signals. The satin (I believ thats what your trying to do) on the hat reminds me more of a metal then satin.

The hair looks a little flat and on the left side where the hair if just over the face, you can see parellel strands of hair (which never happens) and they are quite thick.

And about the WIPs, heck i belive that a iece can always be improved, thus its always a WIP.

[mockmoon]

She is a 18/20 years girl, that's the reason why she is self-woman self-little girl.
About the piece of the hat, i don´t think it's like metal, i've never seen that kind of metal (if you can show me a pic of this kindo of metal...)
About the hair... You're right but i can't do the hair more thin, i've done it with maya paint fx if you know a way to do it tell me.
In this model i didn't want to follow the rules of anatomy, even i dindn´t use any reference image, it's just my imagination.

Thanks for your comments.
Sorry for my terrible english
:shrug:

[Ash-Man]

I'll agree with the hair but overall she looks nice
if thats the style that you are looking for then she is fine
I would love to see her body like a wide shot or something
keep up the good work
:buttrock:

[LordShaitan]

Originally posted by mockmoon
She is a 18/20 years girl, that's the reason why she is self-woman self-little girl.
About the piece of the hat, i don´t think it's like metal, i've never seen that kind of metal (if you can show me a pic of this kindo of metal...)
About the hair... You're right but i can't do the hair more thin, i've done it with maya paint fx if you know a way to do it tell me.
In this model i didn't want to follow the rules of anatomy, even i dindn´t use any reference image, it's just my imagination.


Well i dont have any refrences for the hat, but i guess that it just reminds me a little of gold because of the color hues (Im sure in motion it looks alot better because its a falloff material)

Well i dont know to much about maya, so i couldnt tell you anything there. But as i said before about the hat, i bet its no where as visable during the animation.

BTW your english isnt bad at all.

[mockmoon]

- ashaiad: "I would love to see her body like a wide shot or something".

She is not full modeled because there won't be a long shot of her body in the story.

Does anybody knows how to make thinner hair with maya paint Fx?.

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