Bird Animation

[Booyah]

The path the bird takes feels a little rough and the landing is hard. The bird should have more slow in as he lands on the branch to cushion the landing, right now it feels forced if that makes any sense. The bird might swoop up and back a little more before finally settling into the branch. NIce start

[akin]

Booyah_ thanx fella, will have a look at

[Kimotion]

In addition to what Booyah said, the head turns when the bird is on the branch is a bit to hard. It's true that birds are much more rigid in terms of movement (little anticipation, slow-outs, etc due to acting on instinct most of the time). However, for the purpose of animation, I think you can use a bit more smoothness to those head moves for appeals sake.

Good luck!

[akin]

http://img57.imageshack.us/img57/4663/birdqh0.jpg (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bThZZGzizlw)

Kimotion_ Thanx a lot fella, while l m gettin the crits l finished another one , here you are a clour work

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bThZZGzizlw

[StevenE]

It's short.

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