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david-richardson
05-09-2007, 06:18 PM
hello,

im still new to the site!:) heres my movie and showreel. unfortunately my movie has bad sounds which i will update in a few days time. i had trouble with my hard drive cause it crashed to the floor. anyways please take a look and comments and critics are always welcome!:) btw im also looking for a job right now. currently just finished studies at SAE this april2007 hehe!:) have a good day!:)

David and Goliath
http://s5.photobucket.com/albums/y176/jarr...dandgoliath.flv (http://s5.photobucket.com/albums/y176/jarreddrane/?action=view&current=davidandgoliath.flv)

Showreel
http://s5.photobucket.com/albums/y176/jarr...nt=showreel.flv (http://s5.photobucket.com/albums/y176/jarreddrane/?action=view&current=showreel.flv)


David
noobie
05-09-2007, 10:27 PM
hey man,
watched ur reel i think the animations are pretty stiff and some parts move way too fast, the game character guy kinda jitters in one of the cycles i cant really tell what hes doing

also i find the labels ("game character","short film") pretty annoying... maybe have it smaller and on the margin not in the center

the animations with the box head character i dunno what u were trying to get with the red one.. the other ones were clearer but still kinda stiff and jerky at parts... the blue guys hand jerks up when he reaches for the cup...

i think the david/goliath movie is too slow, the movements all look really linear, the slowness works for when he jumps in the air but..everything else kinda seems the same slow speed all the way through...
david-richardson
05-13-2007, 07:58 AM
hey man,
watched ur reel i think the animations are pretty stiff and some parts move way too fast, the game character guy kinda jitters in one of the cycles i cant really tell what hes doing

also i find the labels ("game character","short film") pretty annoying... maybe have it smaller and on the margin not in the center

the animations with the box head character i dunno what u were trying to get with the red one.. the other ones were clearer but still kinda stiff and jerky at parts... the blue guys hand jerks up when he reaches for the cup...

i think the david/goliath movie is too slow, the movements all look really linear, the slowness works for when he jumps in the air but..everything else kinda seems the same slow speed all the way through...

Thanx Noobie for watching my thing. i appreciate what you think about it. i agree to everything you have said. i still have so much to learn hehe.
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