first model (head)

[Gabe]

You need to work on the eyes, and the nose. Find some tutorials to help you with this.

[Mr Stressbunny]

hi,

seems like you got quite a problem with proportion, perhaps you can try to draw some spline guides or use simple boxes and spheres in the BG layer as reference?


cheers

[Syrogen]

ok i updated the head alot.. and i reworked the nose
http://www.syrogen.com/misc/headsmooth.jpg
here is the side view
http://www.syrogen.com/misc/headside.jpg

thats for the crit guys :D

[WarpedMinds]

looks pretty good, but the proportions are a little messed. Maybe use a picture as a background for splines, are you doing that already?

Are you going to texture it as well? that would look cool

[Syrogen]

yeah, i am using pictures in the bg... ill try to rework the face more tommorow :) and yes i will be texturing it

[Shozo]

Wow! nice work.

But I still feel uneasy the shape. So why don't you reserch anatomy?. Like watching your face usin' mirror or something.

I'd also like to see the textured image.
Keep up nice work! :bounce:

Thank you.

[Bladestone]

Looks good, nice nose, and good eyes... perhaps push the outer lips out, give more flesh around those corners so the sunken cheeks don't meet to closely with the lips....

Will look good textured :)

[Syrogen]

another update :) http://www.syrogen.com/misc/headsmooth.jpg

[Syrogen]

and another view... http://www.syrogen.com/misc/head2.jpg

[Gabe]

OK, here are some tips. Round out the bottom of the nose. You made it flat, and that is wrong, look at your nose in the mirror.

The eyebrow ridge sticks out in a strange way, and it is too pointy.

The eyes are too big.

And you have the chin going in instead of sticking out.

Look at your reference more closely.

Keep it up. :wip:

Are you working from a drawing, or a real person?

[[DSmod]Tweak]

Looks good man But yeah the nose needs some work.

also what tutorial? Could you please link me?

[Syrogen]

thanks for the crit gabe :D
here is the latest model http://www.syrogen.com/misc/headsmooth2.jpg http://www.syrogen.com/misc/headside2.jpg

anyone spot errors? i wanna fix em before i texture the guy

oh and tweak: here is the video http://www.newtek.com/products/lightwave/tutorials/modeling/headmodeling/SubPatchHead_Pazur.avi
really fun way to learn.. im more of a "hands on" learner

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