character: woman

[Goon]

Nice:thumbsup: Im a big fan of your work.

[tzmtn2]

very funny
i had a small problem with the image
but here it is...

[Titan]

looks like a nice model...I cant really tell in the light, but it looks like the folds of the ear might be a little sharp edged.....could just be the light though.....:)

[tzmtn2]

look here is a wireframe of the face
soon ill show u her bodey

by the way can anyone help me with her hair?
i dont realy know how to make good looking hair...
so if u can help me or give me a link to a good toturial
itll be great! :bounce:

[tzmtn2]

ok here is the last updated render:airguitar

[tomb]

Looking nice, the lips are especially good. I think the back of the head needs to be pulled out a bit and shorten the length of the nose a bit, unless that's the style your going for.

[tzmtn2]

finally some comments
tnx Tomb, ill try to work on that...
by the way i like ur jungle girl:bounce:
keep em coming


and here is some updates of the ear... :D

[Opeth]

Yo, looking good!
i think the connection between the center of the neck & the bones above the chest needs to be worked on a little, but u've changed the model beyond recognition & it looks great.

[tzmtn2]

for the last 1 - 2 hours i tried to add some textures just
to see how it goes
usually i add textures only ofter im done modeling
ahhh... but u got tired of modeling

here take a look
its not finished as u can see
but im not planning to finish it
so dont expect to see updates to that direction....:hmm:

[Titan]

that is looking great man...very goth/fantasy....luis royo influenced maybe?

keep it up, I know what you mean about getting tired of modelling once in a while..I have several half finished game characters haunting my hard drive;)

[tzmtn2]

well Titan... yep :applause:
its Luis Royo
ahh i ment The GREAT Luis Royo

i used "evolution" for the texturs
mmmm... what a pice of art:wip:

[Hexodam]

looks amazing, expecialy on this early stage :)

whats "evolution"?

[tzmtn2]

"evolution" is the name of the picture Luis royo painted
wich i used for my textur

[tzmtn2]

heres another update of her boday...
sorry for the quallity of the picture

ok i need comments
anatomic and topographic tips.

[lerpiedood]

Well, it's looking very good! Your head is pretty good, the forehead and eyebrows need work though. The breasts and shoulders are excelently modeled, I would like to see a wire of that area. The major problem I see is that you made a third vein in the neck, it's supposed to be a dent rit there not another vein.

[tzmtn2]

here's ur wire that u've asked lerpiedood

and about the veinsin the neck, well they rnt veins
they r muscles (cald Sternomastoid)
and the third vein u were talking about
is where food and ear travel from ur moth to ur cheast.

[tzmtn2]

here's another update of the bodey...

now what can u tell me about that?

[almog]

m8... this is great... amazing..
u have few things u need to work on to make it perfect...

from what i'v seen in the body pick u need to make her
Beten longer... becuse now the arms looks too long...

i cant belive u made it so fast... what in like 1 weak end
damt man... ur good keep it going u got it

:beer: :beer: :thumbsup:

[tzmtn2]

tnx shoo

and here finally is the back:beer:

[tzmtn2]

k, im getting tired of posting updates
and not getting any reply

i really need our coments & critics

here is a wire frame of the bodey
from bouth sides
tell me if u c any problem with that
i know i have a problem with the proportions
but i cant point it out excectly!

help!!!:eek:

[[DSmod]Tweak]

Really good proportions m8! The chest is almost perfect and looks fantastic. Lot's of people make the chest pointy or overly big. I reqally enjoy the who porportains on this model :thumbsup:

[tzmtn2]

here is the last update im going to post for the next 2-3 weeks
now im going to sleep
tomorrow ill have one last chance to c ur replies
and maybe even answere
and than im returning to the army

so here is the most updated bodey
and please, i want to c more replies...
:wip: :wip: :wip:

[almog]

i think u were right her head is abit big too big

ur u should make her body longer (not the hands) just torso
maybe it will help.... but mate....


I LOVE YOUR WORK!!!:p

[JulianJohnson]

very well done nice model you've made thier. good luck with it

[tzmtn2]

hi there
im back:beer:
look i tried to chage her face
tell me if u like more the new face (#1)
or is it the old face that u like (#2)???

[tzmtn2]

here is the most updated new face

[DangerUs]

#1 HANDS DOWN

shes really looking great ... and dam thats a nice texture (one with the smeared makeup/tear) .... i cant wait to paint some up for my character

[Volker]

Looking Great!!
Nipples seem to be bit too high on the breast though.

~Zach

[tzmtn2]

tnx DangerUs & Babyhopper :thumbsup:
though i dont agree with u Babyhopper about the nipples...

here is a wire frame of the new face

my short vacation is over so soon
and i didnt progrased alot.
hope ull give me some more replys till next time...
so bye for now :wavey:

[tzmtn2]

hi
im back
finally

i've worked some mor on my character
i rebuilt the arm

i would like to now what do u thunk about its anatomy & topology
i've changed the face a bit too...

[hesido]

The face #1 is better and your on the right direction.. The occiput should extend a little more to the back, the back of the head I mean. Take a look at 3-4 women faces from side, bald women women, or with short hair, to be precise. You'll see their occiput extends marginally more backwards compared to your model. Or take a look at a human skull attached to the spine, compare the curve of the back of the head.

The triceps' head extends a little more proximal to the body, The peak of the curve of that muscle should be closer to the torso.

I like the breasts. Really. The nipples are looking up, that is nice :)

The axilla is also good.

Good work, keep it up!

[Keith Young]

Nice work!... the thing that sticks out most to me (or not, as the case may be) is the lack of cranium/skull area in the rear. You might want to look around for some skull models/images to get it closer, but I drew a line in this pic to show the area I'm talking about...

[Keith Young]

Hehe.. oops, looks like Hesido basically gave the same suggestion. Oh well, I hope the image helps :shrug:

[Waters]

looks great to me, better than what I have been able to do so far. How about another update?

[Martyr]

Hi tzmtn2, really good i particulary like the "breast to shoulder" part and the lips is truly good too, fix the back of the head like Mr.young as already said and she will be cool :buttrock:

[tzmtn2]

im sorry for the time i kept u all waiting for the updates
but since 20/4/03 i havent seen a computer til today

tanx for the new comments
and here is what i did about what hesido and keith young have sugested...

now im planning to give her a temperery skin material and to work some more on the ears
after that ill build the hands...

[Vash T Stampede]

Excellent work!

[tzmtn2]

tnx Vash T Stampede

[hesido]

..but maybe the biceps are a bit too "bulgy" .. You may want to make the biceps smaller. And if that correction makes the arm all a little too thin, you can increase the size of the arm as a whole(cylindrically). I mean the ratio of the biceps to the arm may be a bit too much. You decide!


Keep up the good work..

[tzmtn2]

well i dont have much more to show u
but ive chaneged her proportion a bit by
lifting her breasts up
i started to work on the hands too

[zenonithus]

Great job so far. Love the back! I think there's something odd about the collar bone area, like it curves and petrudes too much as it gets closer to the shoulder. Might be worth checking out more reference for that one. Keep up with the updates :)

[Waters]

It looks like her head might be a bit large for her body, just looking at the scale of her ribcage compared to her head. Looks good though, keep up the good work.

[hesido]

The head is allrighty and is within 70% of population. Of course that 70% isn't scientific but that's my opinion. Short ppl have much bigger head ratio than this.

The biceps is bulging man. The biceps!

[RichSuchy]

Originally posted by hesido
The face #1 is better and your on the right direction.. The occiput should extend a little more to the back, the back of the head I mean. Take a look at 3-4 women faces from side, bald women women, or with short hair, to be precise. You'll see their occiput extends marginally more backwards compared to your model. Or take a look at a human skull attached to the spine, compare the curve of the back of the head.



You should see how unlike that Asian heads are, Usually you dont see the back of the head because of the long hear, but there is so little roundness on many very beautiful women. The heads are broader I guess to compensate, with the eyes set not nearly so deep.
I mention it because I am building one that has to live up to the standards my Korean wife has set for me... She is a picky one! Wirse than me!

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