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dreamsunlimited
05-06-2007, 06:40 AM
hi every one.... i am working on this model in my free time.its a sci fi buggy loosely based on a quake 4 concept. so the concept is not mine.
i have not finished the model yet and it also needs to be optimized a lot and also there are intersections in some places as well. :bounce: ....please have a look and tell me what do u think :)
iLegacy
05-06-2007, 07:57 AM
Nice buggy! (1) Why you connect the gun-pipe with the holder? You could stick it into eachother and would save some faces (i sketchet it for you, left: your model, right: my advice).

The second thingie: you should hold the same detaillevel over the whole buggy. At (3) you have for example a very round pipe with a modelled hole and stuff. Thats very detailled and maybe usefull if you do that car for an egoshooter. But at (2) you have a very un-rounded gunplate. Why? I would optimize the pipe or i would give mire intersections to the wheels, gunplates etc.

http://i117.photobucket.com/albums/o72/iLegacy2/buggyhilfe.jpg

But in the end, it seems to be realy cool. Go on!
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