Girls With Big Gun

[Deadalus]

sweet model. but where the big gun?? in her huge glove?
Do you plan normal map for her or just a good ol' Diffuse?
Personnaly i add 1 more loop. one around the belly but its still a very cool model.

-D-

[dreamsunlimited]

looks gud :thumbsup:

[ocarian]

Yep Deadalus :)
Big gun are in Glover

like this (old concept)

http://ocarian1981.free.fr/IMGpagesite/gallerie2D/sketch/sketch04.jpg

for the normal map ?
I dont know
for now I just work on diffuse :bounce: (to work texture)

thanks for your comment

[mindrot]

Looking good ocarian.

One small crit: The front of the thighs in the side view could do with a bit more curviture. Perhaps arc them out a bit. At the moment all I see is a small awkward angle at the top where they leave the hip area.

One other thing I just noticed is that the neck looks kind of short and make her a tad bit masculine.

Texturing is looking good on the skin.

Keep going :)

~M~

[kyphur]

Like the progress. Can't wait to see more.

[ocarian]

Thanks mindrot for your advices :thumbsup: (very useful)I need to move some vertex ok I wrote it :)
I'll try to show soon

Thank for the comment

[ocarian]

hi !

I moved some vertex

http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/4046/cyrane01ym5.jpg


and current work on the map

http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/4247/cyrane02xs2.jpg

voilà

[gsokol]

Where the pants meet the body seems a little strange to me. It looks like the suspenders are the only thing holding them up, and if they were gone the pants would fall off. I think if that is the look you are going for make the wasteline of the pants not so straight so you can tell they are so loose, or bring in the vertices so they look like they hug the hips a little more. Good work otherwise!

[Misuuu]

I'ts a good begin ! i love her Guns !

Continue ! I want the texture !!!

[ocarian]

hi

a little UP !!

http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/1857/cyrane02sx4.jpg

gsokol I moved some vertices on the pant :thumbsup:

[gsokol]

Lookin' good Ocarian

[Kickflipkid687]

She is looking pretty good, but the pants sorta bother me. They wouldnt have a straight wrinkle down the shin like that. I would look at some ref images and change that up. But I know how wrinkles can be a pain in the ass :P.

[iLegacy]

Looks nice but i dont you think too that the ass is a bit to huge for a sexy girl? Correct me if you dont want to create such a "standard-sexy-chick" :D

[Xeroedge]

Awesome character design, and so far the hand painted textures you got going own.

For some reason for me it feels like the character needs a Shinobi type scarf around the neck, so it trails behind her when she runs, and shoots.

Other than that I think you need to brighten up the spots that get worn out, such as the knee area, and the butt.

The button on the pants is super hard to see too, maybe you can turn that the brown color of the shoes so it matches the color scheme of the character? - or black, I'm assuming that's going to be her hair color.

[ocarian]

I try to make a sexy girls but not a cliché like Lara croft (with big chest :thumbsup: )
There are some compensation (ass and big gun on glover :D)

she has some masculine proportion because she needs strength to wear her glover (heu! she is a cyborg :surprised )

I don't really know for the hair color :curious:
I'll try soon to make some test on sketch concept and I ll post here

thanks a lot for your comment again :bounce:

[cheybea]

Really cool concept!
Can't wait to see how it turns out...

[mindrot]

Looking good ocarian.

The toe of the shoes looks a bit bulbulous- kinda like a clown shoes. I'd probably try and tone that down a bit.

~M~

[Meekon]

Nice, I really like the concept and the model has got a nice weight to it. I agree on the shoes though, I couldn't imagine her jumping around and blasting in them. Looking forward to seeing more.

[GoSsS]

Great model but i agree with Kickflipkid687 about the strange wrinkle under the knee.
Shoes are probably in progress so i wait the update to give my opinion on that.

[ocarian]

A little Up
I trying to find a color for Hair
I made a test on Sketch and I like black version and red version
tomorrow I 'll try on the model and i'll move vertices on Shoes :)

http://img113.imageshack.us/img113/4535/haircolorfa7.jpg
thanks for advices everyone :thumbsup:

[yeluis]

absolutley awsome. love the style and character that the shape conveys. LETS SEE MORE!!!

[ocarian]

Hi

UPDATE
on hair color

http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/3861/haircolorol8.jpg

Soon, I ll show some change on the Body

See you :thumbsup:

[blacker]

I was a bit skeptical, but that hair looks COOL! :D

[LordDubu]

Luv tha hair.

[gsokol]

Hahaha OH NO SHES EMO!


That looks absolutely delicous mate.

[ocarian]

hi !

news screens


http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/1610/cyranevb9.jpg

http://features.cgsociety.org/gallerycrits/193158/193158_1179780640_large.jpg

if you have some advices, I m ready :thumbsup:

I'll try to make a scene with this character

a big thanks for all comment :bounce:

[blacker]

This is looking HOT! These are my suggestions although they're largely preference.

This could use a bit more contrast. I'd suggest making her pants a little bit darker. While on the pants, the stitching on the upper legs looks a bit out of place and the folds on the shins seem too pronounced. I would also darken the leather parts on the gloves and add some lighter areas where they would be more subject to wear. Right now, though different colors, everything has about the same contrast, so punch up some areas and lighten others.

[mindrot]

Looking good.

I like the pose you've got her in.

~M~

[lightcache]

that's a great pose and some good topology! :)

the only thing that put's me off a bit is the hair.
I can't help but think erm... dyke...

that's it really :)

[LoTekK]

This is looking incredibly hot. :love: Love the pose, and I like that she's not your typical model/big-boobed female. Love the hair, lots of attitude in that alone (kinda reminds me of Iori from the KoF series, in that sense). I'm liking the semi-anime look you've got going with the color scheme, too.

I definitely agree with blacker, though, in that there needs to be more contrast overall, but most notably in the pants.


I can't help but think erm... dyke...

That comment was necessary, I'm sure. :rolleyes:

[ocarian]

thanks for advices

I ll change some detail on texture :thumbsup:

thanks for all comment

[CodeNothing]

Awsome! my only crit would be her pants ride too high in the back. I'd like to see them dropped about 2 inches to see those lower back dimples.

I agree I like the black hair, If you do anything else I think you will need to change the color of the costume as well.

Awsome model!

[utchamp]

Hahaha OH NO SHES EMO!


That looks absolutely delicous mate.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA...... lol.


anyway the one thing that i notice is that her hair is cropped close to the ears all the way around..... so what is going around her neck (like a noose :) ) and coming down the front??

Also the glove textures are really fuzzy and detract from the overall wonderful-ness of the whole thing.

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