New Zealand Scenes

[Shawshank]

Hey Tim! some great scenes!

Tologa Bay - i like your angular treatment of the hills versus the softer tussock. This one is probably the most dynamic of the three.

Waipu - really cool. i love that forground grass, the flowingness of it. What are those sunken brown stick shapes? to me it reads like part of a deteriorating dingy.

B.O.I - not as familiar with this one. its such a central compostition but somehow it works with the overall shape of the piece. You could put some cool bounced blue light on the ceiling of the cave.

I feel like the frames are really dominating - these images hold their own and could use a less ornate frame. Also some of your texture overlay feels a teensy bit heavy handed. What's the end format going to be? Will you get them printed?

All good stufff
sweeeeet
:scream:

[Tim-Gibson]

Cheers shawshank, the frames have to stay as those are scans of the frames that will be used when I've printed them. I needed to paint with them in the file and thought I'd included them here. I've pulled back some of the overlaid textures and such, mainly pulling them back in the highlight areas.

I've also made some changes to 'waipu,' will pose soon.

Thanks for the comments :)

[Tim-Gibson]

Here's and updateds 'Waipu':

http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a218/Tim_Gibson/waipu_02.jpg

They're all very cheesy New Zealand postcard paintings, but that's what they need to be :)

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