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iChiaz
04-30-2007, 11:03 AM
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Title: Like a Greatest Birds
Name: Dovydas Bakšys
Country: Lithuania
Software: Photoshop

<...> then she saw him. He was alone in the middle of the forest. His face was suffused with Sun light.. The Man was standing on the edge of a precipice... He was looking at the birds, which were flying faraway. All the time he was thinking, that these birds flyed to the Super Cities.. But again, he couldn't realize where it could be... Klaria asked him:
- Vario, what are you doing, what are you waiting for?
And Man said:
- I WILL FLY, like a greatest birds of this planet.

Man jumped down from the rock... <...>

Subey
04-30-2007, 02:03 PM
I like your painting a lot, but the lack of detail on the figure jumping from the tree stump has has me a bit confused.

Otherwise the way you have contrasted the two frames is great.

K0RR
04-30-2007, 02:17 PM
I like this picture very much! Nice composition and lighting work.
Try to push away the background adding fog ( try cold colours) in the way to obtain more depth and colours contrast , and try to add some speculars on the backgroud trees to rach more volumes and easy details on it...

kiboSVK
04-30-2007, 03:23 PM
Nice work Dovydas with gr8 mood;) Keep it up:thumbsup:

nekro
04-30-2007, 04:39 PM
grea work! love the second , just amazing!

waheednasir
04-30-2007, 05:44 PM
fantastic work. well composed, both of them.
i like the second one more...:).

Ghotire
04-30-2007, 05:55 PM
Nice work! I'm partial to the first one, myself.

hasanaliakhtar
04-30-2007, 10:22 PM
Colorss are fantastic in this composition..I really liked the mood of both of them..Specially the first one is powerfully made..Greatly visualized the whole scene..Much appreciated..Shadows and highlights are good..In my humble opinion character can be improved a bit..Apart from that well executed..Splendid job:thumbsup:..Take carez..Keep smiling:)

Zorrino
05-01-2007, 01:19 PM
The feeling of vertigo is awesome. Only thing of note is the little rocks falling from the cliff, they look too regular. Other than that, I love the picture!

hinoon
05-01-2007, 03:54 PM
Really like the mood in the top piece. Nice choice of lighting. Very dramatic. My small crits have already been addressed. Keep it up.

iChiaz
05-20-2007, 08:19 AM
Thank you everyone! :)

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