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K-Macky
04-30-2007, 03:14 AM
http://features.cgsociety.org/gallerycrits/126623/126623_1177902873_medium.jpg

Title: Smile
Name: Kenichi Makino
Country: Japan
Software: 3ds max, finalRender, Photoshop

This is a character I made recently.
I want to express a natural smiling face.

modeled and rendered by 3ds max
texture and postwork made with photoshop
background made with Terragen2

I hope you like it.Thank you for viewing.

Omarios
04-30-2007, 08:25 AM
well her smile is sweet...

but her hair is not realisitc.....and i guess more work is needed on the background as well....

TherOnaaz
04-30-2007, 09:28 AM
The hair is really odd. Is it max hair??? Maybe u could use more than 1 pass for hair render.

hasanaliakhtar
05-01-2007, 12:32 AM
Its really a nice render..Soft texturing which is looking good..In mu humble opinion some parts below and around eye can be improved..As well as lips..Hairs can also be improved..Give them some shine which can bring those into life..Take carez..All the best..Cheers:)

K-Macky
05-01-2007, 02:52 PM
Hello all, thank you for comments and critiques.They are very helpful for me.
I understood there is a problem about hair, eye, etc.
First of all, I will make an effort to improve hair, later I want to show the result.:)

K-Macky
05-03-2007, 09:57 AM
Hello, I corrected hair.Here I show it.
Comments and critiques are welcomed.
http://www5e.biglobe.ne.jp/~k-macky/making/work_0503.jpg

K-Macky
05-13-2007, 05:03 AM
Close-up of her face here.

http://www5e.biglobe.ne.jp/~k-macky/making/works_0513.jpg

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