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malcon
04-27-2007, 01:02 AM
whats up, im polishing my latest animation, its just a simple assignment to show weight. anyway critiques are much apreciated!! thanks!!

http://s22.photobucket.com/albums/b325/malconpierce/animation/?action=view&current=final.flv
(http://s22.photobucket.com/albums/b325/malconpierce/?action=view&current=final.flv)

patfour
04-28-2007, 07:27 PM
Hi malcon,

I think it looks nice; the blue ball definitely reads as lighter than the yellow one. I think the difference would be even more noticeable if the blue ball hovered a little longer (even just a few frames) while it's bouncing in the air.

The cup strikes me as a bit inconsistent in its weight. The fact that it stays on the ground when reacting to the yellow ball's bounces makes it look like a somewhat dense glass, but when the yellow ball tips it over, it looks more like a light plastic. I think it would look more like glass at the end if it resisted the yellow ball for a moment and leaned slowly before tipping over.

Other than that, it looks good, and I definitely get the sense of different weights and densities in the objects.

-Paul

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