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PereBalsach
04-26-2007, 05:52 PM
Hi guys! I want to share with you my last matte.
I'm not a pro, but I'm trying to improve my skills :)

Something is wrong in my matte isn't it? I can't see what's wrong.....
I would be very grateful if someone could helpe me to see the light :rolleyes:

Thanks in advice!

Original Plate :
http://www.creativespot.org/post/data/500/plate1.jpg

Matte:

http://www.creativespot.org/post/data/500/mattehousef.jpg

bechira
04-26-2007, 07:01 PM
nice one. just one comment: on a cludy sky like that, u'll never have hard elongated shadows. try to loose them and will be perfect.:thumbsup:

Grrrrrrr
04-26-2007, 07:45 PM
A houase with pink roof and pink courtain is creepy? Things are changing i see...

MarkyG
04-26-2007, 08:04 PM
Hey an idea with those hard shadows might be to incorporate some sort of lightning element. You know as if it was illuminating the house some - hence the shadows. Anyway just thinking out loud!

markg

PereBalsach
04-26-2007, 08:59 PM
Thank you guys!
Yes the shadows / illumination is wrong, so I'll try to delete the hard shadows to match with the sky.
Hopefully is going to work better.

Thanks!

PereBalsach
04-27-2007, 11:51 AM
Hi guys!
I did a concept for this matte. A little late......

So, what do you think? Now the composition looks better isn't it?
Any advice?

Thank you!

JJASSO
04-27-2007, 07:00 PM
greta, it was really good the work you did on the shadows, the mood is also great , and the second one looks more cinemtic,
I would work more on the fooliage down the house, it looks so well cut,and linear, try to break that perfection

PereBalsach
04-27-2007, 07:33 PM
Thank you james!

You're right, I'll try to break the foreground foliage :thumbsup:
I'm looking for a more cinematic feeling, so I'll do it like the "concept"

Thanks man!

everlite
05-01-2007, 01:59 AM
Hey looking really nice :)

Slight scale issue around the stairs maybe. Personally i think the original photo is the freakiest version :)

- Dave.

PereBalsach
05-01-2007, 07:45 AM
Thanks man!
The last image is a very rough concept, right now I'm working on the final version, with more attention to the detail :)

I'll post the new WIP in a couple of days :thumbsup:

Thank you anyway man!

F.

PereBalsach
05-01-2007, 08:17 AM
Here we go
A little update.

:)
F.

dell
05-01-2007, 10:09 AM
The image looks very flat?

Maybe you can create some trees/foliage or props around the left side of the image, in the foreground and background, this might give it a lot more depth.

PereBalsach
05-01-2007, 08:22 PM
Thanks dell!
Yes I'm working on this part.

Is not the final version, but now it's close to the final version
C&C are very welcome :bounce:

[/url][url="http://imageshack.us"]http://img164.imageshack.us/img164/3308/mattewip03fl1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

PereBalsach
05-06-2007, 12:26 PM
Hi!
Here is an update, a bit of color correction. Better now?
Hope u like it :)

Thanks!!

http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/2104/wip04yf2.jpg

everlite
05-06-2007, 02:47 PM
Looking well, i feel that the side of the houses needs a little perspective maybe, it seems to run flat with the front, not sure, mmmm. Also darkening down the side as it heads further back might help to pull a little depth, in a gradient.

- Dave.

PereBalsach
05-09-2007, 08:13 PM
Thanks man!
I'm a bit stuck with this one....so I dicided to change a bit the lighting.
What do you think? :blush:

Thanks in advice!

http://img459.imageshack.us/img459/9648/wip09fa8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Kutkin
05-09-2007, 09:05 PM
Looks good like this.
Just try to add the glow to the window again and it's gonna look sweet. Or creepy I should say.

PereBalsach
05-11-2007, 10:54 AM
Thanks man! :thumbsup:

Here is another update. Hope you like it :)

http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/2382/wip10yu8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Ivy00
05-11-2007, 11:02 AM
cool house, it is indeed becoming very creepy looking :)

Eligh
05-11-2007, 12:57 PM
your last wip is by far the best, it "should" be the final version :thumbsup:

...BUT *g* i still see some few hard shadows in the middle of the house (especially on the rooftop) and i think it is no bad idea to establish some semi-transparent fog/mist on the ground, that should help you to get some more depth into your matte.

alltogether quite really good work, i like it! :)

greetings

eligh

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