Funky Jaky, Frederic Charpentier (3D)

[urban-rebellion]

I like it. Hair, gun, pose are ace. However, I do think she seems a bit bony, even though she is a cartoon character, like her cheeks especially, and also her ass, it's not 'bootylicous', it's more anorexic. I do realise that that might indeed be the look you were going for, but from the description i don't think so. Also her breasts hang too much to be sexy, but of course thats a subjective thing, i personally like a bit of perk in that region. One last thing is that the enviroment is def. a bit boring, while I realise it's a character piece Having a background, even a blured pic or a gradient is better. Apart from those rather minor crits I think overall the piece is very good, much better modelling or sculpting than you'll see from me anyway!

Cheers John

[OSBOURNE]

i like your style

[juansilva]

Cool character. I like the style.

The one thing that bothers me the most is her cheekbones. They're too pointy and jagged...like the skin is wrapped directly onto the skull with no flesh underneath. The same issue shows in the character you used as your avatar.

Also, her eyebrows seem to be missing, and you should make the glint on the eyes stronger. Get that "spark of life" look.

Love the hair!
Cheers

[cosmic3]

Her classic 70's look is great! Hair is awesome and loved the blue eyes touch. excellent design. good work. would like to see more from you.

[FREDORIDER]

Hi everyone and thanks for all your comments.

I know that some of you have a problem with her been " bony, anorexic ", but it's a style that I'm developing. She's a caricature, a spoof of what the Hollywood stars want to looks like ! You know, skinny with big boobs !

jcsilvar, you're right, a little more glint on the eyes will give more "spark of life" look.

Thanks comic3 good catch on the " classic 70's look ".

Cheers,
Fredo.

[roemsifly]

Hey Fredo
I totally like the cartoony look. The top of the left shoulder looks a little edgy. Anyways: 5 stars! Keep working like that!

[zenmistress]

She looks like a cross between Joyce Wildenstein and Tina Turner and panther. Nice Image.

[Delfor]

It's definitely nice piece of work, but did you realize it has no eyelashes and eyebrows? maybe it's just me, but she's really missing it

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