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MatteoM
04-19-2007, 03:24 PM
Hi,

This is my first showreel, it's not very big work, but i need you with more C&C...


Show-Reel Dim. 640x496 High quality 83 Mb (http://www.art2upz.com/Shoow_reel_web.rar)

Show-Reel Dim. 400x256 Low quality 17 Mb (http://www.art2upz.com/Shoow_reel_web_2.rar)

Thank you
Matteo

felis
04-22-2007, 01:14 PM
Hi,

I just saw your showreel...
And to be honest it's not bad at all ;)

However, there are a few points of critique:
* In the beginning there's a lot of still images of architexture
And these images don't bring out the best of the architexture models
(exept for the bathroom)
I would either choose a more interesting camera angle, or a camera pan?

* There's also some simulation in there...
The ending of the video made it clear that your aiming to show architexture,
not just simulation; Perhaps you can use simulation in conjunction with architexture
to bring out the best of both:

Example: say the camera shows a beautiful living room, that's filled with all kinds of weird
floating items in midair, and among those items is a glass of wine, from which the wine
itself is slowly reaching for the ceiling (due to gravity)... something like that!

If you would change those few points, then you've got a rock solid showreel!

Also, I, my self, just happen to complete my own showreel, can you give me an opinion about mine?
Perhaps even some critique?

http://mysuper8.nl

Greetz & thanks,
Felis

MatteoM
04-22-2007, 03:43 PM
Hi Felis...


I just saw your showreel...
And to be honest it's not bad at all ;)


Thank you...


* In the beginning there's a lot of still images of architexture
And these images don't bring out the best of the architexture models
(exept for the bathroom)
I would either choose a more interesting camera angle, or a camera pan?


Yes, some camera it's no good and some work is very old (late 2005 - early 2006) I study again for have a good camera and good rendering... all showreel it's realize in a few time (1 day) for send a private italian television.

I work for architectural, but I think is very beatiful simulation, I put some example for show, but I study again and maybe I cut this part in my showreel because I don't know very well.


* There's also some simulation in there...
The ending of the video made it clear that your aiming to show architexture,
not just simulation; Perhaps you can use simulation in conjunction with architexture
to bring out the best of both:

Example: say the camera shows a beautiful living room, that's filled with all kinds of weird
floating items in midair, and among those items is a glass of wine, from which the wine
itself is slowly reaching for the ceiling (due to gravity)... something like that!


For that scene I use a Particle system SuperSpray, with-out gravity, not apply gravity for this is strange but it's my first render for create emotion in interior render... I can create a simple scene without wind, wine and another effect and I have the same render but it's not a good rendering it's a normal rendering...

You can see my image in my CGPortfolio...

http://matteom.cgsociety.org/gallery/ (http://matteom.cgsociety.org/gallery/)

Ok... thank you for your critique... I cut some part and for new years I create new Showreel ;)


Also, I, my self, just happen to complete my own showreel, can you give me an opinion about mine?
Perhaps even some critique?

http://mysuper8.nl (http://mysuper8.nl/)



Sure, I see now your Showreel... Then I send you a private message ok? ;)


Sorry my bad english, I hope you can understand me... :)


Good Day

Matteo

:)

felis
04-22-2007, 03:51 PM
No problem ;)

Good luck on the showreel!
Felis

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