CGTalk - Critique the JUMP

red2rose4

04-17-2007, 01:38 AM

Hello all

Pls give u r feedback abt the jump. I made this animation without any planning(just learning), & I am still going to smooth it but before that I just need some cr's from the experts.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0p7FEy5Ego4

ChrisSosa

04-17-2007, 01:38 PM

Can you make a Quictime version so we could scrub through it. It looks like your missing a few key poses and your timing is off, but a good start.

Posthaste

04-17-2007, 05:15 PM

it looks like you are trying to add some anticipation, which is good, but you are creating more of a moving pause. the character seems to ridgidly pause before taking off. also the motion of him in the air isn't smooth. after the body goes up, it starts to come down, you have his body rotating at the exact same spot as it starts to come down. this is creating a wierd motion and doesn't look right. just overlapp some of the actions a little bit more and you will have a great peice.

Posthaste

04-17-2007, 05:16 PM

it also seems to hang in the air for a second before comming down, makes it look linear.

red2rose4

04-18-2007, 01:06 AM

Oh! THanks for all your comments, I am really feeling happy to hear from all the experts like u. HOwever I have lot to do with this small piece & I will finish it & post it here very soon.

THanx again

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