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Grrrrrrr
04-15-2007, 06:39 PM
Hi there!

Since i liked the unordinary type of the subject ( not just a landscape matte), and the refference foto was pretty hard and had many challenges i decided to give this a shot to push my limmits. Also you learn a lot more while competing.


Here is my clean plate:

http://img131.imageshack.us/img131/9793/platefinal3mh3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


Now comes the next step!

JJASSO
04-15-2007, 07:55 PM
Welcome Vladimir I like what you did here, and the shadows you have on the floor , maybe try to blur the left shadow in the floor, I can see the strokes there

good luck !

milanschere
04-27-2007, 09:14 AM
long time no hear, grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr.
nice work, i find the light on the floor in the passage way on the right a bit weird.
as i can see you made a selection of the ceiling and sucked out the red while adding a fair amount of blue and maybe a bit too much green. it is nice but sticks out a bit much i believe. the floor has some dirty lines going across and those pillar thingies at the end of the railing ledges are blury, might wanna crunchy them up. the grey line on the left side on the ground that seems like a curb makes a curv or wave. these are the things i noticed
but don't worry about that, you'll probably tear the place appart in stage 3 anyways.
good luck.

Ivy00
04-27-2007, 09:44 AM
I had that same wavy line problem with the right side of the floor too. I ended up using the path stroke to fix as best as I could.

milanschere
04-27-2007, 10:21 AM
whatz a path stroke?

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