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Destiny-boy
04-14-2007, 06:01 AM
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Title: Maple girls
Name: jun wen
Country: China
Software: 3ds max, combustion, Photoshop, XSI

Hi! everybody.

This is the first work I've done in half year since learning XSI.Except for making body model within 3DS MAX,others were made on XSI platform,mainly was to get acquainted with the new platform,we could say it is a practice.

Due to my limited capacity,the final result is still far from my goal,I'm not too contented with the expressions,but whilst couldn't find a better solution,even though XSI's got very good animation control system,pity I couldn't fully bring its strengths into play.

I'm hoping to make a progress in my next work.Thanks for your appreciation and advices.

Because my English is limited, please forgive me also for the inadequacy of language!
Jadetiger
04-14-2007, 09:46 AM
Love the vibrant colors of this piece. Couple of crits, I think her white skirt should have bump or subtle texture, its very plain in comparison to her robe. The other thing is I would relax her hands, and make her pose look a little more natural. It looks a bit stiff. Great job though on everything else. The leaves trees and robe really stand out well.
Destiny-boy
04-14-2007, 12:59 PM
Thanks you advices.I hope that better regulation and expression, but I do not know how to face with RIG production.
GreenArrow
04-14-2007, 03:04 PM
This is nice, maybe try giving her a better pose and a bit more expression. Good luck!
juansilva
04-14-2007, 04:59 PM
Good Job. The image has a very nice feel. I love the colors.
I agree with the previous crits...the skirt could use some textuer and be toned down a little...and you need to relax the hands.

Keep up the good work!
Destiny-boy
04-16-2007, 11:29 AM
Thanks you ！Friends

I hope the next one works will be improved！
shaodibo
04-16-2007, 12:29 PM
Good work !

The color good is attractive
poemaroc
04-17-2007, 03:45 AM
i like her face,very lovely.
turbomapper
04-18-2007, 12:20 AM
overall look is very good... the colors, robe, leaves .. great :thumbsup:
only thing is the pose of the girl, doesnt look alive more like a puppet
but again great work
fuxon
04-20-2007, 05:43 PM
In Mars time looked has been to your this vice- work, everybodycommentary is very intense. . Completes this work in the short timealready very not to be easy, continued to try hard. ^_^.
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