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SimonGibson
03-09-2003, 11:25 PM
This is my first ever sub division car model. Been working on it about 5 days now... i'd say its about 3/4 done.


http://www.hlrally.net/~simon/Celica1.jpg

http://www.hlrally.net/~simon/Celica_newlights.jpg




What i need to do

*Model wing mirrors

*Increase orange saturation on front lights

*give the panels more depth

*find close up reference for the lights patturn

*model back lights

*model toyota logo

*model underside

*create a better tire material

*model interior

*model new alloys.

Anything else please suggestion

cheers!

Simon
xboxthug13b
03-10-2003, 01:42 AM
looks good but tires seem to big
vorlon
03-10-2003, 05:09 AM
that is a cool car model :)
SimonGibson
03-10-2003, 08:53 AM
i forgot to add its missing spoiler and a front air intake aswell! :P


Once i've modeled the stock version completely i plan on doing a rally version.

IF anyone wants to know this was modeled with 3d studio max and rendered with a skylight.

Simon
Tad
03-10-2003, 09:07 AM
notice the windshield, how the reflection of the sky is all distorted?
dont you think the windshield would be better off smooth?

think about that for the ENTIRE body of the car,
just like a real car, when you get your dents repaired, the most important factor is the reflection, even a minor dent that you might not see normally, will show up when you have a strong reflection on that surface.

Just try to smooth things out.
Duffman
03-10-2003, 09:58 AM
not bad so far.. I'd give you a list of things it's missing or needs to have fixed, but you already seem to know what you're doing. Do everything on your list, and it should be a fine looking model at the end!
SimonGibson
03-10-2003, 06:08 PM
updates

http://www.hlrally.net/~simon/Celicabackwip.jpg


apolgies for huge picture size (my screen res)

ok this is how it looks in 3d max

http://www.hlrally.net/~simon/CelicaMaxView.JPG

apolgies for huge picture size (my screen res)

i've still got lots left to do like i said in my earlier posts :)


Simon.
Man
03-10-2003, 06:14 PM
great modeling man.....i think you could change the wheels material (i can see you have used the lake rem pic for reflection)...are you going to model the tire deformation..holes....wellu know wha í'm talking about!!!and i would like to request a wireframe please....keep it up!
Supervlieg
03-10-2003, 06:15 PM
Looks great, but it could do with some sharper edges and it should sit lower on it tyres.
SimonGibson
03-10-2003, 06:18 PM
wireframe

http://www.hlrally.net/~simon/WireframeMax.JPG

as you can see the tread is already modeled! but when i've got onto the tire material u'll see it better :)


Simon
SimonGibson
03-10-2003, 07:17 PM
shameless bump

http://www.hlrally.net/~simon/CelicaGreen.jpg

:D

I will sort final materials once i've got me model finished :) thx for crits so far.

Simon.
xboxthug13b
03-10-2003, 09:03 PM
try adding bump to tires for threads
SimonGibson
03-10-2003, 09:22 PM
i've already modeled the treads! why would i want to use a bump map? :P

the treads i modeled i've took from another of my models

http://www.hlrally.net/~simon/3d/Rimms1024x768.jpg

they don't show through yet properly cos of the basic light set up etc..

Simon
xboxthug13b
03-10-2003, 09:59 PM
o ok im sorry...i just couldnt see them
SimonGibson
03-11-2003, 01:05 AM
forgot to unhide grills for render :P

http://www.hlrally.net/~simon/Celica3front.jpg

I've been concentrating on the model more than the materials/lighting.




http://www.hlrally.net/~simon/Celica3back.jpg

Nearly done model! (Exterior :P) jsut got spoiler to go i think!

Simon
SimonGibson
03-11-2003, 05:09 PM
nearly finished modeling exterior!

(still gotta extrude a few panels)

then start interior!

http://www.graphicoverload.com/~model_design/Simon/ToyotaSpoiler.jpg
xboxthug13b
03-11-2003, 09:44 PM
looking better but it looks like u are haveing some problems with the back window on the side...
coCoKNIght
03-11-2003, 09:50 PM
It's turning out very good!
At some places it's too edgy, I think, but I'm sure you'll fix that...
Keep it up! :thumbsup:
SimonGibson
03-11-2003, 10:17 PM
http://www.graphicoverload.com/~model_design/Simon/CelicaRender.jpg

I'll tweak the chassis abit once i've extruded 1 more panel :P
SimonGibson
03-24-2003, 12:49 AM
here are updates

(right click links click properties, get shortcut and put that in ur browser, brinkster don't allow linking from another site :( )

http://www20.brinkster.com/simongibson/3d/toyota/toyotac1.jpg

i plan to work on materials finally, make an enviroment, do what ever u guys suggest to make it nicer ;)

I've been modeling the interior aswell
this is what its like so far

http://www20.brinkster.com/simongibson/3d/toyota/interior/interiorupdate.jpg

This project has been dragging on, but i shall persist :)

Simon
runna
03-24-2003, 05:52 AM
I cant see any of the images????
Gremlin
03-24-2003, 06:29 AM
neither can I.... maybe bandwidth problem? :curious:
SimonGibson
03-24-2003, 07:41 AM
www20.brinkster.com/simongibson/3d/toyota/interior/interiorupdate.jpg

www20.brinkster.com/simongibson/3d/toyota/toyotac1.jpg

please copy and paste links to ur browser!" thanks

Simon

(oh and its my 18th today! :) )
kabyll
03-24-2003, 08:40 AM
still can't see the pics but HAPPY BIRTHDAY dud!!!!:beer:
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