View Full Version : my diploma film
04-10-2007, 11:37 AM
this is probably the first time i write here in in cgs altho i hope to start doing it frequently.
so... this one of the shorts i graduated with this year: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q0J5ugyhi2I
3d in xsi, textures in photoshop, compositing in afterfx (some fx in combustion)
short's blog http://theartofpagedecriture.blogspot.com/ with inspiration sketches and more
hope you like it. C&C are welcome
04-12-2007, 12:05 PM
Interesting film, in the mood of Fellini, imho. Like it very mutch. :thumbsup:
04-12-2007, 12:57 PM
thanx a lot pierosmile!
i was really hoping to get some feedback!
hope you guys give me some critics and comments!
thanx in advance.
04-12-2007, 06:21 PM
Pretty interesting & creative. I will mention the bird in the end of the short looked sorta choppy, but other than that, I like it.
04-12-2007, 09:50 PM
Excellent, love the atmosphere. Never saw any choppy bird, was too captivated by the mood and the fantasyworld within the clip.
04-12-2007, 10:34 PM
great work !!:thumbsup:
04-12-2007, 11:10 PM
@kyoshib: thanks a lot, glad you liked it. english is not my first languaje and "choppy" is a first ever for me. it says "rough with small waves" on the dictionary, but i didnt quite understand what you meant.
@unlikelycorny: thanks a lot for the nice comment! we tryied our best to get the atmosphere we wanted, so it's great that you like it.
04-13-2007, 12:20 AM
great job! front page quality!
04-13-2007, 07:15 AM
I hope you greadute and take your certificate. Your short film is very succesful and also your story is very entertaiment. Keep contunie doing great things...
04-13-2007, 07:39 AM
oh that was enjoyable! well done. :)
04-13-2007, 11:19 AM
I liked it, simple and cute :)
04-13-2007, 04:24 PM
thanks a lot for the great comments. i really appriciate it! we worked hard, so it's nice to hear that people like it!
04-13-2007, 07:43 PM
great news! page d'ecriture just got published on "no fat clips".
cool thing is that there is a mpeg4 (with much better res) version with english subtitles.
04-14-2007, 07:20 AM
What's that No fat clips website? a famous website from italy ? :)
I'll be downloading the one with the subtitles
04-14-2007, 11:39 AM
like the story! nice style! really enjoy watching it!
04-14-2007, 05:57 PM
"no fat clips" i farely known forum that i recently discovered to be italian.
by the way, thanks to dekku, blogs web master.
04-20-2007, 01:37 PM
Very nice work guys...
I hope it'll reach the Front Page one day...
04-20-2007, 08:48 PM
Keep doing what you do
04-21-2007, 12:45 PM
@agbarrows: hopefully one day it'll reach front page... for now we are veery safisfied with the comments and results! thanks again!
@mrpank: hope to be able to do so! thanx mate!
04-21-2007, 02:42 PM
hey man it is really beautiful your animation i really love it.
04-22-2007, 09:58 PM
Wow! Definitely an entertaining short. I dont speak Italian, but the message came through quite clear. Other than the fact that the bird was 2D and the rest was 3D, it was perfect.
04-23-2007, 05:13 PM
@jhasse: thanx a lot, really appriciate it!
"Other than the fact that the bird was 2D and the rest was 3D" do you mean you dislike the 2D or 3D? didnt quite get that... :)
http://dekku.blogspot.com/2007/04/page-decriture.html (http://dekku.blogspot.com/2007/04/page-decriture.html) here you can find an english subtitled version.
04-23-2007, 08:02 PM
Very nice. I really liked the mood. It all worked very well together. Character design lighting animation and whatnot. I really like to see when different types of 3D and 2D is combined, and you definately did a good job on that too.
the characters are stylish and intresting. nice work fella
04-25-2007, 08:00 PM
ha ha ....it is so funny...:D ...
I love the video too....en en ....I like the rbackbone of the video....so ****4stars from me....:bounce: :bounce:
04-26-2007, 05:01 PM
Great short :) Very imaginative and well animated. Congrats.
I particularly like the 2d bird, i think it was very well integrated with the 3d enviroment.
Good luck. :thumbsup:
04-26-2007, 06:52 PM
@aghill & akin & minminxu & shy-guy: thanks a lot all!
well the 2D and 3D animation where combined in the classic way, i'de say.
we made a storyboard, videoboard, animatic, and from there 3D layouts for the 3D and 2D. animated separately from there on.
the compositing had the first step for 3D alone, and a second for 2D-3D, in which there was some shadows to match, colors and some overall effects (not much, just some volumic 2D lights, and so).
it was mostly thought from the begining like palettes and atmospheres so the last part came fluently.
04-29-2007, 05:33 AM
I very much like the 2D combined with 3D. Your story was enjoyable and engaging, great work!
04-29-2007, 05:33 AM
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