My princess, LingZhong (2D)

[coffeelin]

good job !:thumbsup:

[Zorrino]

Excellent image! I would - however - take the pencil lines around her mouth out.

[Nyela]

I agree, it has a very nice soft feel to it until i see the pencil lines.. I would remove them also and maybe the ones around her jaw and eyebrows. I would also consider softening up the loose strands of hair around her face with the smudge tool maybe. I really like this piece, I think a little bit of tweaking could make this even better :)

[LingZhong]

Thanks very much!:) I'll keep them in mind and try not to leave pencil lines.

[Rist]

Thanks very much!:) I'll keep them in mind and try not to leave pencil lines.

Great stuff. I agree to the extent that this particular piece works without pencil lines, but in some cases pencil lines can bring out some pieces. Experiment rather than dump the technique altogether.

[Rianti-Wong]

Personally i would like to say that ur girldfriend is pretty :).
And i like how you pain it so smoothly and with calm color, but i think i'm agree with the other about the pencil lines.
I also think that her face is lack of depth, a bit different in other pieces in your cgportfolio.
Anyway, it's abcolutely nice!!

Anyway, the man silhouette behind her...is that you?


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[minminxu]

wow...the girl is very very pretty....and i like the style....just I think her face needs more details to be much better!..any way .....good job .....keep it up ....

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PS:coffeelin!...Jack..?!....The act of irritating!......:sad: :sad:

[flygreen]

I know what this work means now,and i'm moved. Best wishes for you and your princess!

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