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robinson
03-07-2003, 11:54 PM
Just wanted you opinion on this work in progress rendering…
What do you think needs to be improved, I got a list on my own but wanted you opinion first.
Thanks for you help….
I am using Lightwave 7.5b, yes there is a b……..

Damn it just looks to clean “3D”.

robinson
03-08-2003, 01:11 AM
please post something....
is it so bad ???

Jos Metadi
03-08-2003, 01:31 AM
People seem slow to respond lately.

It looks more like a house than a castle. Is this intentional?

rejekt
03-08-2003, 01:38 AM
when i think of castles, i tend to think lots of rough cut bricks.....a lot taller, lose the huge shutters! ;) other than that, it's more than i can do

Mcf
03-08-2003, 01:51 AM
seems to me like a "new style" castle then the ordinary castles we all got in mind :)

this looks to new to be a castle :D try an other texture for the walls and make it bigger :)

also the roof isnt quite castle style. its more "white house style" :)
try to make a real roof with.
but if you tend to change it into a modern house or something like this, it surely looks nice now.

cheers mcf

Backstabbeth
03-08-2003, 03:03 AM
I like it... yeah i wouldnt call it a castle, but it's neat tho.. the shutters look a little think or something, not sure what it is

Oktavian
03-08-2003, 10:55 AM
A bigger rendering would be great, because it looks quite nice.

robinson
03-08-2003, 03:44 PM
OK, you are right, that’s not really a castle, maybe a small Palace !!!
It is a small “Palace” in Potsdam / Germany, I attached the original picture.

The texturing and lightning needs to be improved, the textures must be really dirty and the lightning needs to be brighter.
There must be a water leak near the gutter (is gutter the right word ?)
The grass (saslite) is also to clean, would be alright for a visualisation of a golf course, maybe I should model a few flowers (detail detail detail).
The model needs more detail too.

Thanks for your help, I will post the final image someday, are there any picture where you can say final ???

The Cross
03-08-2003, 05:04 PM
The slanted bottom of your's looks too slanted..Maybe slant the cornets and the wall a little less slanted

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