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grzybu

03-07-2003, 07:07 PM

I think it's finished.
I tried to keep this image simple.
All modelled and rendered in Blender.
This are my very firsts steps in CG. This is my I think sixth finished image and I hope the best at now.
http://www.blender.pl/images/naomi_in_the_studio_final_small.jpg

suttercane

03-08-2003, 02:46 AM

looks good. the lighting could be better, and the paintings are obviously boxes that are mapped. The body of the girl looks good, but the face im not sure about. i could tell better if i saw a close up of it. not bad at all for your 6th image.

Stimpy

03-08-2003, 02:36 PM

her hip/stomach area seems a bit strange to me. a bit too bulky or so maybe.. hard to tell

and the lighting could be just a bit brighter overall i´d say, in particular to show off her face a bit better

asia

03-09-2003, 06:51 PM

Few suggestions: The hips seem a bit too high which made the upper body seem too short in comparison to the legs. The overall lighting is a little too dark which made the face unrecognizable. The shadows of the paintings do not correspond to the position of the paintings. It seems like the paintings should move away from the wall/base if you are to have such wide shadow.

But the style of the piece I just love! The colours you chose made it look like an old painting. I don't know if that's what you were aiming for, but the colours are very rich.

KolbyJukes

03-09-2003, 09:39 PM

I'd say that's goddamn good, I love the painterly look. Especially considering it's using Blender, we don't see enough Blender on CGtalk.

Very very very good work! If that's your sixth image ever...then I hate you...cause you're amazing.

-Kol.

Vushvush

03-10-2003, 01:00 AM

good idea... but too much poser

grzybu

03-10-2003, 07:26 AM

Thanks everybody for comments ;)
I know that this image isn't very good, but I'm beginer and I still have very much to learn.

hannibar

03-10-2003, 06:30 PM

good idea... but too much poser

That's no poser he has used.

Stimpy

03-10-2003, 06:40 PM

Originally posted by grzybu
Thanks everybody for comments ;)
I know that this image isn't very good, but I'm beginer and I still have very much to learn.

i think everyone here so far really liked your pic. i sure did.

JIII

03-10-2003, 06:55 PM

thats really good dude i mean the face might not be top notch. But the body only needs a few little tweaks to be perfect. if blender has soft shadows maybe use those that would make it look a little less digital

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