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[Martin-K-]

about time you made a decent mouth ;)

[cerreto]

haha !!! :)

[lildragon]

cerreto I was looking for more on this lil gem of yours :) kinda has a sully feel to him ;) I especially love the proportions on him.... nice job

[trevlb]

here's a couple of suggestions for that model

-add some more detail around the ankles and feet

-possibly make his feet smaller in proportion to his body and arms (the body and arms tend right now towards ape proportions and following through with that on the feet may help the look)

see nickz's 'dino ride' in this critiques area for a good example of 'cartoon' type detail

hope that helps

[cerreto]

yeah i changed him back didnt like the look of his mouth and no style realy fit what i was looking for ! here it is simplified

[cerreto]

oops

http://alshaheen.net/artists/cerreto/POG.jpg

[Rabid pitbull]

i really think this is a neat looking guy!! He needa teeth though. His eyes are great, and I do like the proportions too.. sort of apeish. I would add teeth and make his mouth smaller, his ears are wierd too. Are they going to be Dog like? They seem unfinished. True? Now that i look at it without mouth, he reminds me of a English bulldog in the face... Cool look

btw Ur monitor is huge!! what is the resolution set to?

[JoBbE]

"I'm panicing because it's a total lack of fur here!"
[freely quoted from Monsters, Inc.]
:D

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