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cerreto
12-13-2001, 10:02 PM
toon wip

http://alshaheen.net/artists/cerreto/Image3.jpg

im not very happy with the way he looks at the moment but cant figure out what it isi dont like (for sessions at spiraloid

Martin-K-
12-13-2001, 10:29 PM
about time you made a decent mouth ;)

cerreto
12-13-2001, 11:37 PM
haha !!! :)

lildragon
12-14-2001, 01:22 PM
cerreto I was looking for more on this lil gem of yours :) kinda has a sully feel to him ;) I especially love the proportions on him.... nice job

trevlb
12-14-2001, 01:42 PM
here's a couple of suggestions for that model

-add some more detail around the ankles and feet

-possibly make his feet smaller in proportion to his body and arms (the body and arms tend right now towards ape proportions and following through with that on the feet may help the look)

see nickz's 'dino ride' in this critiques area for a good example of 'cartoon' type detail

hope that helps

cerreto
12-14-2001, 01:57 PM
yeah i changed him back didnt like the look of his mouth and no style realy fit what i was looking for ! here it is simplified

cerreto
12-14-2001, 01:59 PM
oops

http://alshaheen.net/artists/cerreto/POG.jpg

Rabid pitbull
12-14-2001, 07:49 PM
i really think this is a neat looking guy!! He needa teeth though. His eyes are great, and I do like the proportions too.. sort of apeish. I would add teeth and make his mouth smaller, his ears are wierd too. Are they going to be Dog like? They seem unfinished. True? Now that i look at it without mouth, he reminds me of a English bulldog in the face... Cool look

btw Ur monitor is huge!! what is the resolution set to?

JoBbE
12-14-2001, 08:13 PM
"I'm panicing because it's a total lack of fur here!"
[freely quoted from Monsters, Inc.]
:D

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