My Very First Character........Help me out....

[digital_rhino]

Well, for a first character, not a bad start. Some of the main issues I think are:

(1) There doesnt seem to be a pelvic region. The legs seem to extend directly into the torso. The waist garment doesnt do enough to hide this fact.

(2) The feet need to be defined from the legs more. the leg seems ton descend right down to the toes. though that may be because of the image angle.

(3) The calf muscles need to be more defined.

(4) more definition in the torso area. The waist is also too thin for a muscular character.

(5) The Bicep muscle is oddly shaped, and the definition between it and the deltoid needs to be more visible.

(6) The Forearm my friend, is far far too flat. as well as the hands. bulge out those forearms more, and increase the thickness of his hands and fingers.

Cant really see the definition in the face, so i wont crit it without a closeup.

Keep up the good work. Make a few changes and your character will look a lot better.

:thumbsup:

[right_on_cats]

Yeah this is a definant WIP.....Im just looking for others opinions so I can clean him up........heres the face.......the eye patch needs some work.......also I'm having trouble with the tangency on the shoulder areas........im using NURBS in Maya.....if anyone has any sugesstions

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