Character - Karl

[Dun]

Topish view

[Dun]

and lastly, from behind.

[Carlingue]

Hi !

What is he going to be ? Is this a model of your imagination or a clone of ....?
Are you keeping in mind the proportions ? or just modeling as it goes ?


Like the guy ..........looks great so far !:)
Proportions are not ok ! sure you noticed !

again what are you looking for a real life model ? or a toon one ?


Good job ........I like the style ......!

[entenweich]

the model seems to be cartoon style. So i would say the immoderate proportions of feet and hands are ok, but i wonder if a smaller head would look better anyway...

[Backstabbeth]

yeah, the head REALLY jumped out as me as not quite fitting.. i didnt mind the feet and hands so much.. it does seem cartoony to me, but the head still doesnt fit with the rest of the style of the body. I bet slightly shrinking the head would do the trick

Well done!

[Dun]

Here's an update. Thanks all for the advice on the head. I also fixed some other details...

Carlingue: He's going to be an 'early man' - but not a caveman. He's out of my imagination. Proportions have been adjusted - could be adjusted again...:shrug:

And yep... I'm shooting for a cartoonish style... :bounce:

Thanks!

[p@g0]

Pretty good!!

One thing bugs me off tought...

IS head look like an old person...Is chest looks like a 20 years old guy.. Some part of is body are skinny and others are muscles...

I Can't tell if he's old or young.. hars to see for me!

But the model is good :) I like it!!

[entenweich]

hm...hard to say what it is, but something's wrong with the head.
i would say it would fit perfectly on a sturdy body, but the current one is slim... :curious:

[Dun]

Sooo...

... a good friend of mine checked out this model and gave me a boatload of great pointers and fixes!

I didn't have to push and pull verts too long to see I needed to start from scratch.

Here it is so far....

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