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[zen]

wheres her nose at??
i guess you are going for the manga-type noseless woman face.
If you are, you should consider using a toon shader, as this facial style kinda looks weird in standard raytrace.

[Anchuvi]

139 views...and only one comment...either the site is that good...or that bad :(

[toma]

Hi Anchuvi.

I think wondering if the site is good or not depending on the number of views compared to the number of answear is not the right attitude. I think having questions about the quality of what you make is a better approach... Just a personnal impression.

Anyway here we go for the critics :

- I think that the fact that she is not really human is done on purpose. Otherwise she has a really wicked pose. Seen form here, it could be possible that she has a mono-breast.

- Her arms look like tubes. Maybe try to give them more definition. Try to get some anatomical drawings to get inspired.

- Her nose : where has he gone ?

- Her hair has a strange behavior with light. It goes from blond-black to light purple.

- Her mouth should be more defined. It's thickness does not correspond to the wide opened eyes i find.

- The background is a bit strange...

Let's see if you can improve all that !
I'm impatient to see her being more cute and teasing...

Have a nice day !

toma.


ps : i hope you're happy to have a new answear !!! ;)

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