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MoeHaidar

03-06-2003, 03:34 AM

This is my latest character, made using 3D studio max

I'm doing a book cover for my Illustration class. The cover will be for a book about computer animation.
I'll show how I went through each step from the initial sketches to the final render with max.

http://www.onereelfilm.com/dogs.jpg

03-06-2003, 04:24 AM

the head looks good but if you added some shoulders it would help the character look more whole. post up the mesh

Kralle

03-06-2003, 04:36 AM

good job, but you need to change the body.

MoeHaidar

03-06-2003, 01:35 PM

what do you guys think about this body

http://www.onereelfilm.com/dog2.jpg

m-greenwood

03-06-2003, 01:50 PM

I think the mouth needs work.
That open position looks a bit 'forced' out of the mesh, any chance of a wireframe?
Cheers.

clusterfuq

03-06-2003, 11:41 PM

i like it. sorry its late, but go with the new body. like the texture, really works well - only suggestion, try doing something with eyes brows - have one raises, it'll realive bring the character to life. good luck

its th 7th in the uk now, so you've got 5 hours yeah...?:thumbsup:

MoeHaidar

03-07-2003, 03:22 AM

Its actually still the 6th here in Toronto Canada
The project is due tomorrow at 8:00am
looks like another all nighter again:insane:

Here is another version of the dog
any other suggestions

http://www.onereelfilm.com/dog3.jpg

Carlingue

03-07-2003, 04:34 AM

Looks nice ..... the ears are a bit small !

Don't think you'll make it for 8:00 if you need all of the body for your book !

Well good luck !

P.S. the texture is quite nice too !

p@g0

03-07-2003, 04:49 AM

Looking good!

I may suggest that you put a little more chin...

The ears look too thick for me.. and maybe a little too small

and the shoulder.. its kinda breack the mesh.. hard edge!

But you did a good job :thumbsup:

Hope you'll have enought time to finish it lol

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