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ErshadRahbar
03-21-2007, 02:04 PM
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Title: kitchen
Name: ershad rahbar
Country: Iran
Software: 3ds max, HDR Shop, Photoshop, VRay

hi dear

this is my first post in cgtalk
i create this scene by 3dsmax9 and material &light & render by V-ray

please tell me your idea about it

sorry for my english
hope u like that

flyboyscn06
03-21-2007, 06:56 PM
very nice lighting, only critcism would be that it looks like the door is about to hit the tree should someone decide to prop it open more.

Ofitiu
03-21-2007, 07:44 PM
wow, great image, everything is just great

arkiku
03-21-2007, 08:37 PM
very nice and very realistic.

the only thing thats bgging me is that the tree outside has its shadows to the left and the shadow from the door is to the right.. flip the outside image and i think it would be an amazing image.

ErshadRahbar
03-21-2007, 10:28 PM
thanks my friends

ErshadRahbar
03-21-2007, 10:34 PM
arkiku
the only thing thats bgging me is that the tree outside has its shadows to the left and the shadow from the door is to the right.. flip the outside image


yes that's true but this shadow is not for near tree it's for the farther in left side.

very thanks

ErshadRahbar
03-21-2007, 10:38 PM
thank all

neil09
03-22-2007, 06:15 AM
Nice work.
May be the room will be little brighter.

ErshadRahbar
03-22-2007, 06:37 AM
thank all

the another render

ErshadRahbar
03-22-2007, 06:45 AM
dear arkiku this is the back picture

MaryamNademi
03-22-2007, 07:33 AM
Hi Ershad,

Very nice job.you can simply blur the background material.it has a pleasant view.the colors are nicely done.the only thing that i would check again is the scale of the cupboard & i expect the room to be brighter.
I like th illumination for the night shot very much.

Keep up the good work.

Maryam

Z89
03-22-2007, 09:38 AM
Your kitchen looks to be a cool place to hide from the outside sun...
Nice work man...
4* (one short for the shadow of bg tree...how u missed that:))

edcorusa
03-22-2007, 12:46 PM
Great image I love the detail. I have to admit that the outside shadow through me off too. I see what you mean by it being from another tree. Great detail in the room. I really light the modeling. THe one thing that I find that looks odd is the lighter leafed tree that is just in the skylight. I does not seem to go with the background trees. I am sure this was done to get the shadows but it does not seem to fit in the image right. I really like how you make the room look cool, but gave it a warm lived in feeling. Great job.

ErshadRahbar
03-22-2007, 02:33 PM
thank all for great comment

i fix the color of this scene in v-ray and photo shop. and want to going to warm

and also fix the saturation

edcorusa : this isnot shadow it just is the reflection of the background picture

neil09 , MaryamNademi , Z89 , edcorusa , arkiku , Ofitiu & flyboyscn06 very very thanks

kind regards

ErshadRahbar
03-22-2007, 02:49 PM
and this is the wire

ErshadRahbar
03-24-2007, 07:11 PM
Special thanks for my freand ehsan dabaghi

ErshadRahbar
03-29-2007, 04:38 AM
this is the orginal picture

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