Character:Girl's head

[cakeypigdog]

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hey this is great work. i like the nose and mouth a lot: great form on the lips.
2 little things to improve it:
firstly your ear is a bit vague: it looks a little 'floppy' and is not really as clearly defined as it could be. i'd rewok that a little: try ang give it some more definite shape.
other thing: and this is no biggy: the bags on they eyes are a little to pronounced: particuarly on the inside of the eye by the nose.
its a great start though. looks well modelled and clean. would like to see some wires.
keep it up :) :wip:
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[Jhonus]

jah, jah... very nice, very clean.

i agree, the crease running around the eye is a little too unnatural and uniform.

and perhaps bridge of nose is too thick.

love the nose and upper lip area... :buttrock:

oh yeah, forehead maybe a little square up front?? cant tell from one angle tho. also, you use wiro tutorial?

[gimein]

I'm using Michel Roger tutorial. For me it's the best :)

[blackthorn70]

she looks awesome so far. How old is this girl to be? The forehead seems at bit big. but the brow/eyes/nose/lips are really well done! plan on doing a body?

[gimein]

2 blackthorn70. First, i have to do texturing and hair. Then there will be body. Maybe :)

2 Krugar: about squre forehead - maibe a little bit - there is a front view

[Mcf]

the forehead looks a bit strange especially the eyebowns - head top part is a bit too "deformed". looks like the character ran into a bus :D

also the eyes are, as mentioned before, a bit to unrealistic.

the rest is nice work. hope the see the finished char soon :)

cheers mcf

[MaDeuce]

Looking good, but ill agree with the crease around the eye being too harsh. IN particular, I would soften it around the tear duct, there is not that much flesh there

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