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Ischwara
03-18-2007, 04:58 AM
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Title: On The Phone
Name: Indira Ischwara
Country: Australia
Software: Photoshop

This is a character design created to be a site banner for a girls-only online community. This version is the raw one only, I will post a link to the mentioned forum when the banner is uploaded.

Made using Photoshop in about 6 hours. I used my own limbs as reference. :)

Thank you for viewing and please let me know what you think. :)

MojtabaN
03-18-2007, 10:42 AM
great work Indira it`s really
good job:thumbsup:

jezelf
03-18-2007, 11:38 AM
That's really nice. the limbs work really well. the skin tones are great. nice subtilties. The nose looks a bit flat, probably because there's very little nostril definition and eye lashes look a bit longer than i expected. the face looks a little stylized so maybe thats intentional.

Everything is very bright very and fresh looking with nice colour palette, which I like but I find your sig a bit too distracting because of the contrast in colours and it take up quite a bit of space over the girl. Im more in favour of sigs which are a footnote of the piece than become part of it - but thats just my preferece.

should work well for the website! cool stuff.
cheers
Jez

digitalinkmind
03-18-2007, 02:43 PM
Great painting Indira.:)

Pretty smooth composition...Maybe add little details to the nose will make it perfect.
Congratulations !

Cheers.

oogieboogietoogie
03-18-2007, 06:51 PM
Nice colors, Indira. :) I think her left foot seems a bit small, however, and the shadows for the folds on the back of her shirt look kind of unrefined. But the style is very soft and comfortable to look at. :)

Keep up the good work!!

adrephil
03-18-2007, 10:02 PM
just beautiful indira!... :thumbsup: , the brush technique you used is perfect for the purpose of such a piece (girls only on-line community) being that it has that soft and feminine look. also your color choices will definitely appeal to a female audience.

Since it is intended to be used as a banner, (imho) i can see why there is no need for much detail.

Note: cuteness seal of approval!!....lol:)

....anyways...lovely graphic...love it!

Ischwara
03-19-2007, 06:44 AM
Thank you everyone for such great feedback! :scream:

Mojtaba - Thanks so much, I'm glad you like it. :)
Jeremy & Rodrigo - I just noticed that the nose is awfully flat seconds after submitting it to CGTalk, my bad... :sad: But as Karisa mentioned, it's not really noticable as a banner thankfully. I really need to be more careful next time. :)
Yihyoung - Thank you for pointing them out, is the foot size really that different? Oh no...
Karisa - Cuteness seal of approval!!! Aww, thanks! That's too much.. but I'll accept it! :D

UncleCameleon
03-19-2007, 12:32 PM
Very lovely colors and soft light. :)

Ischwara
03-20-2007, 07:45 AM
Thanks, Uncle Cameleon! :)

mikeldi
03-20-2007, 11:09 AM
Very nice pin-up for a female community. I think you got it Indira, congrats.

EhsanD
03-28-2007, 11:32 AM
Oh lovely http://qsmile.com/qsimages/38.gif
I really like it ...
Cheers dear .:thumbsup:

Ischwara
04-01-2007, 09:41 PM
Mikeldi and Ehsan, thanks so very very much. :)

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