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phobos
03-04-2003, 09:02 PM
Well here's my new effort on building a human head. He is supposed to be a man.
I think that I'm not gonna make any changes. I have to make about 20 Illustrations on 2 months time (for my BA. I'm a graphic designer)
so I think that I don't have the time to be very nitpicking. Anyway here are the results. I would really appreciate ANY comment cause I'm reallt lost here with everything I have to do for these illustrations.

http://users.otenet.gr/~jim08088/8man.jpg

http://users.otenet.gr/~jim08088/9man.jpg

http://users.otenet.gr/~jim08088/10man.jpg

http://users.otenet.gr/~jim08088/11man.jpg

http://users.otenet.gr/~jim08088/12man.jpg

http://users.otenet.gr/~jim08088/14man.jpg

http://users.otenet.gr/~jim08088/15man.jpg
phobos
03-07-2003, 11:11 AM
First try with a texture. Need to correct the texture on the lips and on the eyes and add a slight bump map. Comments as always greatly appreciated.

http://users.otenet.gr/~jim08088/9Correct.jpg
phobos
03-07-2003, 03:58 PM
Jeez not a single answer! Wow!


http://users.otenet.gr/~jim08088/11net.jpg

http://users.otenet.gr/~jim08088/12net.jpg
JIII
03-07-2003, 04:07 PM
Looks good but if you arent gonna change them what are we supposed to say? If you want ideas on what to do with them in the end thats pretty much up to you. i mean maybe fix the symmetry object around the top f the skull thats all i can see
phobos
03-07-2003, 04:21 PM
If you think that I'll have to change anything please say so. I said that I don't think that I'll change anything because of time constraints. Not that I won't change anything at all.

What do you think needs to be changed.I've looked at it for many hours so I just can't see anymore what's wrong with it. But I think that he is a little crosseyed. Now that I look at him again he is insanely crosseyed!!!

In a scale of 1 through 10 what would be your grade?
JIII
03-07-2003, 04:33 PM
personaly I think that the main areas that need to be fixed are the.

1. Nose It is totally straight leading up into the nostral area. make it more of a v shape leading up to the nostrals. look at your own face is the nose totally straight? it starts small at the nasal bone between the eyes. and then gets bigger towards the bottom.

2. the curve of the skull is not smooth enough. looking at the front shot. the skull goes almost straight up almost straight across and the down again. I am looking at an anatomy chart right now and it looks like a mans head should more of a constant curve. smooth that out again.

3. if you already havent done it already make sure that the outer egde of the eyes is farther back then the inner edge.

I would give this head about a 6-7
CosmicBear
03-07-2003, 05:50 PM
the texture is a bit too yellowish, i think. other than that, i'll have to agree with JIII about the nose and the top of the head.

good work! :thumbsup:
noen
03-08-2003, 09:19 PM
i agree with JIII

the nose is a bit odd and i cant tell for sure but the outer corners of both eyes look like they are higher than the inner corners - ive always drawn them level

there was this instructor who would take a dab of pure cadmium red right on the model - we white folk are *very* pink ya know ;)


noen
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