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JoranD
03-14-2007, 07:59 PM
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Title: Interior Design
Name: Jor Dha
Country: Belgium
Software: 3ds max, mental ray

Hi,

A good friend convinced me to finaly post this, This is one of the renders I did last year for my final project in Interior Design. Designed, modelled, textured by me. Rendered in mentalray. There is also a presentation/animation on my website (see portfolio ... on the site look for a play button, need to make the thing more clear).
The design concept is a store for the bike clothing brand Dainese. So I designed a shape trough the store that referenced a racing track (because that’s there image).
All comments will be seriously appreciated.

Thanks to Dominque Cockx for the encouragement, comments and help.
Thanks to Mathi for the advice.
byakushov
03-15-2007, 01:26 AM
Hey Jor Dha, really like the layout of the shop - I enjoy the interconnectedness of it. My only criticism is that it appears slightly sterile for a place which I associcate with alot of movement and vitality. I believe a splash of textural colour and a hint of a hue in the lights could really warm this image - making it more appealing. Anyway, keep up the good work!
Silverwing
03-15-2007, 06:57 AM
Very nice design and architecture...
I like it a lot! It´s a very interesting
and good looking concept! Thumbs up!
SweD
03-15-2007, 09:14 AM
it appears slightly sterile for a place which I associate with alot of movement and vitality i agree. your picture need more light sources. spotlights on the roof, light tubes near the floor under the bankets (it's an exemple). And your interior needs more color. Maybe a colored wall, or a different tone of gray, don't know.
I think you can add more stuff too.
;)
floriancoe
03-15-2007, 10:00 AM
Hey Jor Dha,

looks very nice your rendering. and i like the design of the presentation-tables!
fyi: these tables were build up in the o2-stores in germany (its a mobile-provider).
its a pity that this idea isnt new. nevertheless, it looks fine

nice day
flo
JoranD
03-15-2007, 06:40 PM
Hi,



Thanks for the responses … they’re very helpful,



Floriacoe: I didn’t have a clew, but thanks for the info. I’ll differently look it up. Any way when I started the design I thought I had a new concept with the flowing line. But a few weeks later I opened up a book on store design and found 3 similar things. It’s not easy anymore to com up with something new.



SweD, byakushov: You’re right, it is sterile. I wanted to ad more colour trough pictures of racing motor legends but my mentor was a minimalist and they pretty much hate colour.

And I modelled all the lights and put IESers in them, witch provided warm light. But that wasn’t renderable and basically I didn’t have the knowledge to make that work at the time. So I kept it with the direct and sky light….. But maybe I’ll try. Just for the hell of it.



Silverwing: Thank’s

I'll try to improve it. When I have some time.
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