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entenweich
03-04-2003, 05:08 PM
i'm doing this character for an short game-intro, using 3dsmax 5.

Throusers are still under construction...
I plan to let reactor calculate the throusers later, that's why they look like zero-gravity.

Critiques would be appreciated :)

http://www.freemails.ch/~bob/marley_cgtalk/marley01.jpg
http://www.freemails.ch/~bob/marley_cgtalk/marley02.jpg
http://www.freemails.ch/~bob/marley_cgtalk/marley03.jpg

Kamul
03-04-2003, 06:41 PM
hehe sieht ja ganz gut aus ich würd nur noch am gesicht und vorallem an den haaren arbeiten:-/ der bauch sieht auch komisch aus aba sonst isses echt cool.
PS:BOA HAT DIE DICKE TITTEN

entenweich
03-05-2003, 01:17 AM
Gave her a slightly different hair style. Looks more comic-like to me now, but i think it fits.

Originally i planed her without this urban look, but i think this greyisch look is the better one. See the original sketch below...

http://www.freemails.ch/~bob/marley_cgtalk/marley_sketch.gif http://www.freemails.ch/~bob/marley_cgtalk/marley04.jpg

PS:BOA HAT DIE DICKE TITTEN

hehe, ich dachte schon sie wären zu klein :cool:

Hickory
03-05-2003, 03:55 AM
She has a bulge in her pants...sure its a she?

entenweich
03-06-2003, 04:01 PM
Hickory, i would say you are right :/
Should be better now...

Besides, i did some more improvements (boots, gloves, belt, the folding of the cloths).

Next to come is the bone-rig...

http://www.freemails.ch/~bob/marley_cgtalk/marley07.jpg
http://www.freemails.ch/~bob/marley_cgtalk/marley08.jpg
http://www.freemails.ch/~bob/marley_cgtalk/marley09.jpg

Remi
03-06-2003, 04:04 PM
It looks good but I would fix the butt part of the pants....it looks like theres a little present in there...also...I like the hair in the drawing better...spend a little more time and make her have the long hair...I think it would add a lot to her...also the ear looks detached to me......overall it's a sound model....good job...just some minor things to work on...keep it up:thumbsup:

entenweich
03-06-2003, 04:27 PM
I like the hair in the drawing better...spend a little more time and make her have the long hair...I think it would add a lot to her

i think so, too, but i really don't know how to do. Since the character is going to be animated, long hair will become a real problem (btw.: i'm not really good in animation stuff).

Tipps would be most welcomed :)

entenweich
03-07-2003, 06:27 PM
about the "bulge-in-her-pants"-problem:
my mother just came through and saw the model. the first words i heard were "She got something in her pants she shouldn't have..."

:insane:

ok, i thought i'd solved the problem, but it doesn't seem so.

back to the polys again...
It's also an opportunity to fix some other mistakes by the way.

entenweich
04-04-2003, 10:24 PM
had a lot to do in the last month so there were not much enhancements.

there will be more closeup views in the movie than i originally thought there would be:annoyed: . And since i wasn't completely satisfied with the head anyway i decided to do a new one.

The head isn't finished now, but maybe you got some c&c before it is...

I also did some new eyes (basicly part of the head, but there is a singly thread , which i started in an attack of mental derangement ;) ) (eyball-thread (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=53583))
take a look at it

:beer:
cheers!

http://www.freemails.ch/~bob/cgtalk/marley_head02.jpg

entenweich
04-04-2003, 10:52 PM
http://www.freemails.ch/~bob/cgtalk/marley_head03.jpg

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