lil clown, Priscilla dolce (2D)

[Glenfx]

Although its a stilized image, it has severe anatomical problems.

.-You conected the back with the shoulder (the shoulder should connect to the side of the torso) that means.. there should be a volume from the shoulder that divides the arm from the back (actually i dont know how to explain it) if you draw a straight line from the red cloth on her back to the start of the neck (the torso side) you might get what i mean.

.-The leg (the one between the arms) should come out much lower.. it appears to come from the belly rather than her behinds
.-in the same leg, the foot should bend much lower and it appears she has two right feet.

.-you can make her neck much thiner to give her a nicer look

.- the hand in the back is totally wrong

[thesquid]

Yeah ...
I see what you mean now that i look at it
I allways want to get better so this kind of comment is really helpfull :love:
Thank you very much for taking the time to help me .. i think i might repaint this image or just learn from it and carry on.

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