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WhiteGuardian
03-11-2007, 01:34 AM
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Title: Woman and Apple
Name: Robet Shi
Country: Indonesia
Software: Photoshop

HI. I got my inspiration when i saw my friend's photo and i saw her smile is so sweet, so i picked her as my model. For the apple that i used, it's symbol of health. Woman beautiful and apple health, that's a powerful combination in the world. Maybe i'll try to make an Aprodite Goddess for my next artwork. ^_^
This artwork took a week to finished it. Still using Photoshop CS and helped by tablet.
I dedicated this artwork for my friend's anniversary on this October 13th. She also my model in this artwork.
Thx,V. Hope you like this present.
OK, comment, critic and suggestion are always welcome
Hope you all like it.
Thx
Glenfx
03-12-2007, 11:53 PM
I wrote this to someone else, but its something it can help you too.


I dont intend to be rude, but i would really recommend you to draw a LOT. You have notorious problems in form and anatomy.

My suggestion would be to:
.-start by just drawing simple forms and start from there.
.-Look for books about how to draw and draw a lot. (There is a book from Loomis freely available on the internet... i think)
.-Open a thread in the WIP forum and post your images there to take criticism.


Also your concept states about the beauty of the female form and the health of an apple, but 70% of the image is just background. I belive its just too much space wasted that makes one loose focus on the subject.
WhiteGuardian
03-14-2007, 11:44 AM
Thx a lot Mr. Glen. Thx for ur advise and ur recommend. Yeah, u're right. I'm too weak in anatomy. Still learning how to get better. :)
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