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krugar
03-11-2007, 01:18 AM
Hey guys,

I just need some crits on this flightcycle i animated. I just gone past the blocking stage so i haven't been working in the graph editor for long, anyway what do ya think...

Perspictive View (http://www.sendspace.com/file/gn6gme)
(http://www.sendspace.com/file/gn6gme)
Side (http://www.sendspace.com/file/0hg30u)

Front (http://www.sendspace.com/file/5xi0po)

Thx

P.S. This is my own model and rig :shrug: so the weights probably aren't that good.
krugar
03-15-2007, 04:35 AM
wow no replys the animation must be really bad, back to the graph editor for me :sad:
aesir
03-15-2007, 04:44 AM
s'alright I guess. But frankly, its just not that interesting an anim. If you had some stronger up and down motion on the bird I think that would help a lot.
krugar
03-15-2007, 05:23 AM
Thx for the comment aesir will post an update later on 2day
KielFiggins
03-15-2007, 06:59 AM
I wrote this tutorial for a workshop I taught, might find it mildly usefull.

http://www.3dfiggins.com/tuts/bird/
krugar
03-15-2007, 06:17 PM
Hey thx for the tut kiel it did help out alot. For this latest anim i speed up the wing flaps and added some more up and down to add a bit of weight to it, anyway what do you guys think more crits and comments welcome :)

persp (http://www.sendspace.com/file/s98q2k)
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