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Dusk108
03-03-2003, 09:57 PM
Ok heres two charcters I'm amking for an animated short. Both will eventually be rollerbladers. No texturing is done yet just colour added for clarity.

Any comments, criticisms, flames or personal attacks are welcome but somebody please comment.

Heres the woman. The red colour will probably be darker in the animation, it needs to be brighter for the stills or you can't see anything.
http://www.nmcstudents.com/~3djr/Rohan/RedWoman1.jpg
http://www.nmcstudents.com/~3djr/Rohan/RedWoman2.jpg
http://www.nmcstudents.com/~3djr/Rohan/RedWoman3.jpg

This is the guy. Again the colours here aren't the final ones just guidelines
http://www.nmcstudents.com/~3djr/Rohan/ManTorso.jpg
http://www.nmcstudents.com/~3djr/Rohan/ManBoots.jpg
http://www.nmcstudents.com/~3djr/Rohan/ManFull.jpg

Please anybody comment, I'm just a student and i need the help.
Emre
03-03-2003, 10:48 PM
Hello dusk.

What software do you use? what do you study and how old are you?
Dusk108
03-04-2003, 02:56 AM
Software is Maya 4.5, renders in mental ray just to show them better. The course is 3D animation, although it mostly just teaches you how to use Maya. These characters are actually for my portfolio project. As for my age I'm 22 and have been taking 3d for about a year and half so i'm still a young guy.
scott2600
03-04-2003, 04:14 AM
compared to your guy character i think your chick could use a little bit more work...she looks kinda stylized whereas your guy looks more realistic....her perportions are kinda off... are you using reference..can we see wireframe...but other than that it is coming along pretty good, keep it up
Dusk108
03-04-2003, 04:19 PM
Okay here are some wireframes. The guy has extra polys around the edges of the armor so they smooth properly.
http://www.nmcstudents.com/~3djr/Rohan/ManWire1.jpg
http://www.nmcstudents.com/~3djr/Rohan/ManWire2.jpg
http://www.nmcstudents.com/~3djr/Rohan/ManWire3.jpg
http://www.nmcstudents.com/~3djr/Rohan/WomanWire1.jpg
If anyone has any tips on how to do hair, or could direct me to a good tutorial, it would be much appreciated. I've seen a couple tutorials but they don't seem to get the results I want.
http://www.nmcstudents.com/~3djr/Rohan/WomanWire2.jpg
mushroomblue
03-08-2003, 04:37 AM
nice work dusk. a couple comments for ya:

a) she might benefit from having a rib cage (and maybe some abdominal contours to make her look athletic). i don't know if that crosses your boundries of realism for this project, but the proportions of this girl are screaming at me. spoon?

b) tweak the neck a little maybe... so she can breathe? just looks a little painful.

looking forward to your updates. :beer:
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