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Littlelizard

03-10-2007, 01:58 PM

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Title: Underground Station
Name: Simona Ceci
Country: Italy
Software: Photoshop

Hi Guys, i recently posted this artwork and received some crits i appreciated a lot, unfortunately i deleted my post so that the old version of my work can only be seen in my personal gallery. I am posting the new version with some changes i made based on some advices some of you gave me ( who i agreed with), they made me think more about the way to rebuild the middle construction that hope you l will like it more. Thanks a lot and i will keep appreciating your feedback.

SeifoSid

03-10-2007, 05:59 PM

Lovely enviorment, the top part is quite amazing, the bottom needs a bit more shimmer when it reacts with the light.

keep it up.

rawwad

03-10-2007, 07:04 PM

Very nice work! Like idea and structure details:thumbsup: 4stars

digitalinkmind

03-11-2007, 01:53 PM

Hi Simona.:)
Wow! Now you got a stunning painting... the composition look´s much more balanced.
I give you 5 stars. Amazing artwork.

Cheers!

able320

03-11-2007, 01:59 PM

awesome stuff man, nice composition with very stron shilluets

Littlelizard

03-11-2007, 05:52 PM

Thanks for your crits, i appreciate that much.:)

onlykiran

03-11-2007, 06:23 PM

beautiful painting. I jst luv it.
but only one thing I can't understand. wen the lightin is coming strongly from top, the human (the 2nd top in the image) is having only one shadow. the 2 humans walking together on the other side(the 1st top in the image) is having some other directional shadows. can u clear me this.

ch33r5 :thumbsup:

- kiraN

notpill

03-11-2007, 06:31 PM

Oh yesss :thumbsup:
Much better! Great improvement.
Stars (again).

Littlelizard

03-11-2007, 06:35 PM

(beautiful painting. I jst luv it.
but only one thing I can't understand. wen the lightin is coming strongly from top, the human (the 2nd top in the image) is having only one shadow. the 2 humans walking together on the other side(the 1st top in the image) is having some other directional shadows. can u clear me this.)

Well maybe when i placed the single human i didnt' notice that he should be below the line of the construction receiving just the light from the farest part of the image, my mistake!

Littlelizard

03-11-2007, 06:40 PM

Thanks Notpill!
Glad you like the improvement!

Grazie.

Micro26

03-12-2007, 09:30 AM

Maybe the scale of the 2 people to the left should be smaller.
Beutiful painting and very well detailed.Nice mood and atmosphere also.
Keep it up
:thumbsup:

thyn

03-12-2007, 09:36 AM

Love that light ! Very nice work ... you have my vote :)

Miriam

04-13-2007, 08:41 AM

I LLLLLLOOOOOOVEEEE ITTTTTTTTTTT!
" 'un riesco...'un riesco più a seguì la luce con le pupille!"

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